I Like it I Like It :)

You are! Still going to have Cloud use a Sword right ?, have him use the DMC set up with a pare of pistols and a sword.

Only use the Sword from Advent Children Causs that Sword was So Cool.

If you have not seen Advent Children then the Sword is six seperate parts that can be used together or as one

more more :)

Hm, I was caught by the summary and had to chesck this story out.

So far, I am very impressed. I really like your charactersation of five-year-old Cloud, and Vincent too.

I'm looking forward to seeing how things will pan out from here, but the first chapter was enough to tell me how good it will be.

Great beginning.

~Vialana

A wonderful beginning - I cannot wait to see where this goes!