Reviews for Light in the Dark
BlackSilveDemonRose chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
AWWWWWWW That was sad but very cute at the end! :3
Teenager chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
this was so beautifully written it left me speechless. this is such a hard idea to portray, and you did an extraordinary job. the flashbacks were easily blended in with the present, and i loved the metaphors you used. the element of repetition was what i liked the most. i've seen a lot of writers screw that up, but you executed it perfectly, it was so natural and not awkward at all.
The aspiring Firefly chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
MY GOD...

that was, beyond beautiful... i cried when i readed roy's mother and father's death, also Wolt T-T

but at the end, when Marth gave him the gift...i got this really nice and fluffy feeling /

amazing story...
Ike x Pit FAN chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
*sniff* that was so *sniff* beautiful You made me cry ... awesome!
demonz8000 chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Oh dear word. This story is just amazing and sad in ever single way. I love how you have captured those sad moments in the story where some of us could somehow relate. I found it truly sad how you described each hell-Christmas that Roy had to go through. It seems like the only Christmas' he ever enjoyed was maybe the first few before Ninian (WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DIE? D8 ) passed on and the current one with Marth. Ah, what a wonderful couple Roy and Marth makes~ Ah, I do know that this story was placed onto fanfiction (and I thank you dearly for placing such a wonderful story up) three years ago but I could not resist placing up a review for this sad yet wonderful story. Loved ever single bit of your story (I think I found a few mistakes but pay no mind as I am a master of mistakes). However, for the Wolt scene, I remembered that on the very first mission for Sealed Swords, Wolt was the first to die from an axe-man so that had caused me to both let out a small chuckle at how the Wolt in your story lived somewhat much longer than mine (Hey! Sealed Swords was my first game and I had no idea how to work things out-tutorial, I got kinda bored of reading and going at a slow pace-so Wolt died on me D8 ). Any how, wonderful story, both sad yet romantic (for Marth, Roy, Ninian, Eliwood, and Wolt) which you have done wonderfully to mix in the two type of genres (including some angst). A straight into my favorites without any hesitation and I thank you once more for uploading such a wonderful story onto this site for others to find. Thank you~
eyabayeya chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Nice Story, So sad for Roy though
Zelda Rockbell chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
That is so beautiful! I am seriously crying! I luffles it!

~Zellie~
Hikaru Morinaga chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
That was so sad, I actually cried.

What Roy had to go through was also sad. The end was so touching and cute and *sobs all over self*

Beautiful. Just beautiful.
ShinseiSeraph chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
Oh, that made me cry. That's the first fanfic that has ever made me CRY.

You said to notify you of spelling errors. I found bellow instead of below and women instead of woman. You used the plural instead of one person. You might think that that story was bab, but I really liked it. Got a bit lost on the flash backs though.
SlyphOriginseeker chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I loved it it was full of Darkness only to be banshed by the light of a kiss of love. oh by the way if you wish to be part of the Writter of the Year Award hosted by the F.R.A (Fanfiction Review Association) we ask you to join this event by e-mailing me and giving me your respond no paticipation necessery for more information e-mail me at and I hope you do continue with these wonderful stories. Have a Happy New Year
Final Authority chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
That made cry...

Seriously it did, I never cry during stories either, I think the only one that did that (besides this story) was Fubuki no Kaen (which was also Marth/Roy... big concidence ).

Great job...

...

I miss Wolt...

*cries again*
Dark Moon Crystales chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
Oh wow. I finally had the time to read something and found this, it's amazing. I was never a fan of Marth/Roy but since they're all over the place I read one or two every now and then; glad I did!

You could make it go further though, you know...

*slaps herself* Oh,dirty dirty me! :D

Great work, keep it up!
Icy Chinoumi chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
Aw... what a sad yet sweat fanfic! And your welcome, man, i should really stop being so darn lazy and write another fanfic. After all, my christmas break starts today. Nope, no spelling mistakes that i can think of right now. Wow, such a sad life for Roy! Glad he got someone in the end.
crystalicios chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
AW!

Like I've said before... I normally HATE same sex pairings. In fact I hate all of them evem Roy/Marth. But for you, I can make a big exception! I LOVE YOUR ROY MARTH STORIES! AHH! *screams and jumps like a wild fan*

Sorry, I'm a bit hyper. I just got back from taking exams. Winter Break started today so... yeah! _
Hikaru Tsukiyono chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Aww, it's not really a stupid ending. It's sweet... I rather like it myself. And Roy does deserve a break, after all that pain.

Nicely done! I think I found one little typo, where it says "So sweat, harmonious..." I believe you meant 'sweet'... but hey, it's something easy to overlook. At least you didn't end up with words jammed together like they are in half of my chapters of whatever it is I'm writing. XD

Merry Christmas! :D (early, but that's all right. :D)
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