|Reviews for Escape|
| jdeo1997 chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
great story. I got to say, this is now my personal headcanon for how Vakama got to the great temple
| Connor Kent chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
Very good! I enjoyed it thoroughly!
I liked the part where Jaller said tha the Vahki know Takua's worse punishment was sending him back to work. lol!
| Feline Freak chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Yes I DID read this! I can't believe I never left a review... *looks at myself in a puzzled way*
Anyway: even though I'm late: I always liked this story, how you gave Takua and Jaller a part in Metru Nui. You like those two, don't you? ;)
| Friend-of-Kita chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
was ,I've ran out of things to say!You're really good at writing stories and I'm sure you're gonna get even better later!
Well,I gotta run now so later!
| ShadowDrygan04 chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
this was realy good and shows that vakama thanked his friends by making jaller the captin of the guard and takua the chronicler as he liked to explore
| dragon of atlantis chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Great work. You should write stories like this more often.
| FireMimi chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
| kaibasgirlx chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Oh. My. Gd.
That. Was. AMAZING!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic! It was absolutely fantastic! It was such a pleasure, honestly, you got Vakama's, Jaller's and Takua's personalities down pat! I couldn't find a flaw in this fic, even if I wanted to. Outstanding! It was so well done, I really hope you write another one soon.