Got about a third through this first chapter and got a bad feeling. Yep, it's not complete and hasn't been updated in 10 years. Knew I should have paid attention. Sorry, not reading further. Many other recently updated and completed stories to read.

We're in the future! Where are the other chapters?! *pout*

y'ever going to finish this?

This is a really interesting story. I know its been a loooonnnnggg time since it was updated, but I hope you will try to finish it. Please don't leave this reader hanging.

Whoo hoo! This is EXACTLY the kinda fic I've been craving! I tried to write one but could never find the inspiration to fully engage with it!

I like your 'new' tortures. That's more scary than him just using the same.

This is great. Only recently started reading crossovers with NCIS. I hope you will be continuing this.

I am confused about why or how they're in Florida though. It's not exactly anywhere near Colorado.

First- This story is very interesting and it'd be really cool if you would continue with it. Second- no, the pen theme wasn't lame. It made me smile. :D

I hope you decide to continue this at some point. I found it very enjoyable and was pleased to see Jon and Ba'al.

Pi is the devil as well...

And the animal is a hippo named Bert, I believe, although someone's probably told you that already.

Any chance of getting more chapters on this story sometime soon? The whole idea of having NCIS and SG1 together chasing their missing members and trying to get them out of Ba'al's hands is a nice one, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Before i read this story i didn't think a SG1 and NCIS crossover could work but your great writing techniques really work and its a very interesting story.

Ok, so I just tripped over this and now I want to finish it! Please finish the story!

Hiya!

I was just going through my lost of story alerts when I found this. I really hope you write some more soon.. Clone!Jack in the hands of Ba'al is WAY too delicious to pass up!

MORE OF THAT, PLEASE! :D

I really enjoyed your idea for blendning the two shows together and I hope you will finish the story eventually

NCIS and SG-1 my favorite tv-shows at the same it, jippi!

Two notes thou, Gibbs doesn't likes being called sir and it feels like Gibbs gave in a bit to easy with handing over the investigation.