Reviews for In the Line of Duty
Ditte3 chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
Good one!
serenity3695 chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
This is just so awesome. I've read it like hundred times . There's no way anyone could've seen that coming and then we can't help but smile . Thank for all your wonderful stories :D
ym4yum1 chapter 1 . 9/18/2012

Azolean chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Okay, that was just cute. Wonderfully surprising finish; which is a rarity. Thank you for putting a smile on my face this morning.
Cutter12 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Denouement Intrusion chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Trolling thru older stuff and found this one. Completely charming. Like the rest I totally did not see it coming. Warmed my heart when I needed it. Thanks a lot for sharing it!
minijo1990 chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Love the ending, I did, so, not see it coming.
wscaster chapter 1 . 1/9/2007

That was one of the more unusual pov's that I have read, and I have got to say that I loved it!


It had me guessing right to the very last line, and then I couldn't help but laugh.

Thank you again for a fantastic read!
thebondgirl chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
:P lol that was so cool the way you had it written from the kevlar vest's pov - very original and a great read:) keep it up!:)
RaineArilan chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
Oh wow. I never saw it coming.

I was all set up for some Guilt-angst. But no, the bullet-proof vest was having thoughts of loyalty.

It's...very different. But in a good way. I love it.
MizDenton chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
What a unique twist to an already well written story. I did not see this particular ending coming.
OzMissieK chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Fantastic! I didn't see the end coming. Well done :)
Kylie Anderson chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Brillent! Very witty and clever. I adore this story!
enigste1 chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Excellent piece, expertly written. I commend you on a thoroughly original work of fiction.
atrum infractus chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
I didn't see that one coming! You did a great job making the vest sound human, it was a wonderful little piece.
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