|Reviews for A Not So Envious Love Story|
| Jazzy chapter 6 . 7/2/2015
Poor girl but I like it.
| chaeirunissa.farah chapter 16 . 12/30/2014
well,when i read it,the beginning is really cool
but in the end of chapter.. its boring
its same other ways winry get rape or anything else like that in begining , the diffrent is winry like envy. isnt the chapter is too muccchh ?
i hate multichapter cause in the end always bore -.-
bdw is good story i like it C: keep writing
| Jazzy chapter 17 . 5/25/2014
I want more story's of envy and winry it so hard to find more.
| Jazzy chapter 16 . 5/25/2014
Yes winry should be pregnant plz and they got married .
| Jazzy chapter 3 . 5/24/2014
I have been reading this over and over again plz update.
| Jazzy chapter 10 . 4/18/2014
| Jazzy chapter 9 . 4/18/2014
I like this it good.
| chayy chapter 17 . 3/20/2014
where where is the edning? omg the ending?!
| Lien chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
WTF? Why must you do that!? Why is envy a friggin rapist? What is wrong with you?! Rape is NOT A HAPPY GO LUCKY SEXUAL FAIRYTALE! There are real people getting raped and you sit there thinking that rape is cute and romantic. GET SOME FUCKING BRAIN CELLS!
| Anon chapter 13 . 9/25/2013
All of your chapters suck. They are way too short and there are tons of grammar and spelling errors. Things happen too suddenly, too randomly. You need to put more thought and detail into the chapters. And learn to spell.
| GreenWithEnvy chapter 17 . 7/25/2013
pls write a new chapter soon!
| ImJustGreenWithENVY chapter 17 . 7/24/2013
I really enjoyed reading this I give you mad props I am simply infatuated with envy!
| chloe103 chapter 5 . 6/30/2013
| 4701rose chapter 16 . 6/16/2013
Pardon my rudeness, but are you refering to PRIDE when you said WRATH? Because Wrath is King Bradley...
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/16/2013
STOP TORTURING WRATH!