|Reviews for Hold Back|
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/26/2013
WTF what was this story it's fucking confusing as hell
| kyle is my name chapter 30 . 3/10/2013
i loved this story great job just amazing
| kyle is my name chapter 4 . 3/9/2013
o0o omg i knew it
| BubbleG00se chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
Wow... I was considering not reading this final chapter as i had fixated in my head that this was going to end on a cliffhanger and i would be really eager to see what was going to happen next. I was wrong; this was a perfect end to a incredibly entrancing, upsetting and brilliantly written story.
Seeing as you were fifteen when you wrote this - the same age i am now - I have to say that is astonishing! I don't think I'd be able to write anything nearly as good as this!
Really well done for this story. I feel kind of silly reviewing this when it's been 5 years since you finished it but oh well, it's to good to ignore.
| BubbleG00se chapter 11 . 1/20/2013
Damn i know It's been a long time since this Story was published, but i just have to say it is fantastic!
| Guest chapter 30 . 11/3/2012
omg ! why did you have to stop at the most interesting part! :)
| Yokai-kyuu chapter 30 . 1/21/2011
That... was awsome. i just got finished with your story, and the way you tied everything togerther in the end was spectacular. This is actually the first review i've ever given, out of the hundred or so stories i've read, so congrats on that. It's well deserving of it. Keep writing, you're good at it.
| Ebsilon chapter 30 . 6/9/2010
Wow. I needed a few days to take it all in and compose myself.
I have read many books, stories, and whatnot, but I tell you, with all the honesty I have, that nothing has come close to touching this. Absolutely astounding. I am utterly speechless.
I spent hours pondering your story, lost sleep and study time. It is simply the best writing I have ever seen.
Have you ever felt as if you have gazed into a soul? Seen every facet, felt its agony and triumph? That is what this story is. Never before have I read such a profound work of art.
I do not give compliments lightly, I do not often write reviews, but I felt compelled to write this one. Firstly, because (and you probably already know this) you have an incredible gift. I kid you not, this is wonderful. Secondly, because I want to let you know just how powerful it is. Thirdly, because I am simply dying over the ending. If you could find it in your heart to write chapter 31 you will be my hero.
At any rate, although depressing, even crushing, your story is inspiring to me. I will never be able to write something again without thinking of this work. I cannot find any words in our language that correctly describe your work. So I will leave you with a thank you, a thank you for creating one of the most beautiful things I have ever seen.
| lovova chapter 30 . 9/1/2009
In the immortal words of Stan Marsh...Holy shit, dude.
I...I really just don't know how to react to this. The ending is so amazing and yet at the same time so agonizingly -frustrating-, and I just want to go back and re-read the whole story just to see if I can make any damn sense of it. This, this was torturous and wonderful to read through the whole time. I want to write a long, deep, complex review, but at the moment I am just too...stunned. Stunned is the right word.
Great job. Truly excellent.
| the Leander chapter 30 . 5/22/2009
Wow. I spent several hours today reading this story and I am damn impressed. It was... amazing. I'm not generally one for overly angsty South Park fics, but oh my god, the craziness and the depression in this was addictive and inspiring for, uh, screwed-up story ideas This was just so... perfect, absolutely perfect. I'm completely in awe.
| K. J. Pitre chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
just to let u know, this started off great. im putting it in my favs
| RoguefanAM chapter 30 . 7/2/2008
One of the most depressing fics I've ever read on . I seriously almost ended up crying at the end. Still, I liked the fic regardless. Just wish that the story would've had a happier ending, but really...I should've known better, no fic this dark has a happy ending. I guess I just...was hoping to be proven wrong.
Anyway - this fic was exceptionally well-written, one of best psychological fics out there for sure.
Keep up the good work! _
| MayMaddie chapter 30 . 7/2/2008
Wow... I'm kinda out of words right now. This was one hell of an intense fic! One chapter more would be nice but come to think of it, definetely not necessary. The ending was absolutely brilliant and came out of the woods. Loved it and honestly think that you should leave it here. It sort of fits the whole story that in the end there is no clear coclusion. Seriously bravo! You impressed me, this is now one of my fav South Park fanfic. Glad I read the story now and not back then when you started this. It would've been killind me waiting the updates. :D
| Lady Azura chapter 30 . 5/20/2008
Is that it? Is that the end of the story? If so, that was one incredible and intense fic. I really enjoyed it. If not, you HAVE to update or I'll simply die!
| tyila chapter 30 . 12/24/2007
! YOU NEED TO UPDATE! this is such a wonderful story, and you seriously need to write the last chapter! I NED TO KNOW THE ENDING!
anyway, you are a fabulous writer and i happened to stubble upon the story and stayed up for 2 days straight just so i could read it all. that addicting!