Reviews for The Deal
Lily Scheckner chapter 20 . 11/1
Every spare moment I had in between school, homework, and yes, reading, I have poured over this fanfiction. I may also tell you that I write fanfiction critism in a magazine, and I couldn't find anything wrong with this one!
guest chapter 1 . 10/17
Come on! Hermione willing to drop her grades to get revenge over Ron. Not so bloody likely. Being "the brightest witch of her age", Im sure, she can come up with something else. Also it bothers me, that D and H goes from disrespect to respect (when alone) without a transistion period. Too easy.
Jola123 chapter 21 . 10/16
Just finished reading and I have to say I liked it quite a bit. But. Yep, a big but. But I felt it a little to much lovey-dovey-happily-ever-after-fluff in the end. Plus I couldn't get over Hermione not caring for getting an A, that was a little too out of character for my liking. Anyway, thanks for writing this fanfic :)
Jola123 chapter 2 . 10/15
Uuuuh, what an evil plan. Hermione's going full revenge on her two best friends!
Jola123 chapter 1 . 10/15
Interesting start. Could you correct the typo in the second to last sentence though? "BE my boyfriend" not "BY".
Maddie chapter 21 . 8/23
Guest chapter 21 . 7/9
awww that was a beautiful story. i agree in the beginning the characters seemed a bit like a bunch of other dramione stories but as i read on i began to love the tale. it properly shows dracos slyness and hermiones wit which is extremely important in a lot of dramione fanfics. the ending was satisfying and overall i say a 10/10 because it exceded fanfic standards. i hope you continue to write because, from what i can tell you are really good at it.
Guest chapter 19 . 7/9
this is what i think the dress looks like
kristienuuna1212 chapter 1 . 6/28
hahahahaaa.. draco's reaction make me to laugh..
MrsMalfoy-19 chapter 21 . 2/28
aamlkb chapter 6 . 2/14
amguevara88 chapter 21 . 1/31
I know this story is old but it was awesome. One of the best Draco Hermione fics I have personally read. I appreciated that's unlike other stories it takes forever for them to respect one another, there isn't all that angst going on.
Dracohasmycat chapter 5 . 1/19
Oooh I forgot about the beginning of this chapter! So gooood.
Dracohasmycat chapter 4 . 1/19
Ahahahhahaaha. This is just as good the second time around.
Dracohasmycat chapter 2 . 1/19
So I read half of this months ago and I've decided to start it over and read all of it after recommending it to a bunch of people.
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