Reviews for Broken
RuneYue chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
It may be clichè to you, but I think it's a very beautiful poem. The only real critique in this I could give is to try to use a more variety of discriptive words instead of the same over again. Regardless, it's quite lovely!
bury me among the ashes chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
That was breath taking I loved it, you are gifted, I bet you could publish these, the emotion is very skillfully put into the poem, and it's worded like a novel. From one poet to another you have real talent.

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flamethrowerqueen chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
*grins* Very nice job on this poem. It had a good theme, and I think the rhyming scheme in this one is some of the best I've seen from you. Excellent, Sakura!
Miriku-'-'-Yami no Hikari chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Aww! I like it!

Kimiru: I can't say anything I haven't already said, so I won't bother. _
Sailor Charon chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Yes! First review! *does first review dance* _;; ...ehem. There was lots of depth and emotion, and nice usage of words. I think you're a very talented author _ I'll go read 'Crimson Sorrow.' Bye for now!

~Sailor Charon