To bad never finished.

I’m disappointed that this story didn’t continue. I think there was a lot here to like. Life changes for all people, including writers, so sometimes fics just stop.
Thank you for sharing your creativity.

I know old and dead story but thought I'd say my two pits anyways. The first chapter was strong this one not so much. After being ignored for 10 years a child won't suddenly feel sorry because they got an I'm sorry LETTER! Not even in person a letter... No they'd instantly think "why'd you never tell me then?" Or "how come it's in a letter and not person" a child no matter how smart will instantly think their just trying to stop him going dark with the knowledge harry has. Their saving face and nothing more, be should burn and ignore the letter because it's worth absolutely feck all in actual apologize material and he should never respond to it till they prove their actual sorry or not

I LOST IT AT CRUD AND BOIL WTF

I'm very sorry that you have abandoned this excellent fic. Thanks for sharing what you wrote.

T.G.H.

This is an interesting story and Michael seems to be a unique name for Harry's brother. Thank you for writing this.

Hannah abott

Shitfic

Is it worthwhile to hope for an update, or am I being overly hopeful?
Probably the second.

Really enjoy this. I know it’s been a long time, but maybe you could finish first year?

Couldn't get past the first chapter

this fic sucks balls

pulling childish pranks after being hospitalize...
can you useless pussy?

You do know how humans work, right?

I suggest you keep that information in mind and then have a read of your work.
You'll notice that your characters aren't human going by how they talk to each other and how they think.

They're written like an Alien trying to make sense of something it's never seen before.
Almost but not quite right, it's the uncanny valley of characterisation.

I'm sorry that you interrupted the fanfic, seems interesting...