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   creativesm75 chapter 11 . 2/19/2016 Good |
| Noble Korhedron chapter 11 . 12/12/2015 Great chapter; hope you lose your WB soon! |
| spk chapter 11 . 12/11/2015 Definitely wish there was more of this. I'm intrigued by the prophecy. :) |
| Araytigre chapter 11 . 11/19/2015 this has been a great spin-off to TLT, and hopefully your muse will allow to get back to this at some point. This Harry is pretty cool, and powerful, as well as intelligent. With that last paragraph, it would appear that Michael just might have a connection to Tom too, or at least the two boys share a bond connection between themselves (hence the vision that Harry saw during the Troll incident), and Michael gets some bleed off from Harry. Hmm... my thought that if the fifth Mirror isn't going to go to Padma (as previously mentioned in an AN), I'm thinking, maybe Michael. My thought behind that is, that the two boys are starting to get closer, and depending on this version of the Prophesy, they just might need to be able to contact each other quickly. I also think that Harry may have a small amount of precognition, not quite at a Seer's level (but close), which is a part of some of his "visions". Also, we know that Harry has been having Nightmares, I wonder if Michael is too (and like Harry, is keeping it Secret). Thank You. TTFN |
| Lycanthromancer chapter 5 . 11/8/2015 Hmm. After all of those girls are taken out of the race for Harry's love interest, that leaves Lily, Harry's sister (whatever her name was), McGonagle, and Madam Pomfrey. I wonder... |
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/6/2015 Continue |
| Gioia chapter 11 . 9/28/2015 Thank you for sharing this story with us! I'm sorry to read in your note that it was such a struggle getting that last chapter out. I greatly appreciate all the hard work you invested in making this chapter, and the entire story, so captivating. I kept wishing throughout the last few chapters that the Lone Traveler/Harry could make another appearance to metaphorically slap Dumbledore in the face with reality. Dumbledore needs to be bluntly told how wrong he is, and how hypocritical, given his own past, to view Hal/Harry as an evil obstacle to Michael's supposed destiny. For him to fail to see how selfless, caring and loyal Hal is requires near willful blindness on Dumbledore's part. Riddle had no friends - only followers. Riddle cared for no one but himself and was gleefully cruel for entertainment. There is no reason to poison Hal's own parents against him, as Hal displays no such traits. I wish Traveler/Harry could give Dumbledore a wake-up call so that Hal could have a more loving relationship with his own family. Thanks again for your hard work! |
| Goose chapter 1 . 7/16/2015 So basically Harry hates his brother because he's famous due to something he had no control over? I sense a bit of projection here... |
| Philosophize chapter 11 . 9/18/2014 I hope you don't abandon this... |
| draconin chapter 11 . 9/18/2014 This is a fascinating and really original idea, and very well written. If the inspiration strikes you again please don't fight it! |
| FMAlover32 chapter 6 . 6/2/2014 Awsome! |
| Anon chapter 9 . 4/4/2014 Call them FOBs - Fanatics about blood |
| LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 11 . 3/27/2014 I'm so sorry to see that you've, seemingly, given up on this story as I've enjoyed your different take on the 'sibling as the BWL' trope. I also like the new friends of 'Hal's'... I was wondering if 'Teddy' Nott might soon be the recipient of the fifth mirror? I really dislike Bumblebore (even in the books!), so if he's going to be as wrong as usual, I hope he gets his come uppence! I'd really like to see you continue this great story. Thanks! MelJ |
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/16/2014 can u please hurry up and write some more i really want 2 know what is going 2 happen next |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/16/2014 I'm guessing daphne green grass? |