Reviews for The Necessary Part
Wynni chapter 2 . 12/8/2019
Oh ouch, that last line.

Wonderful read. I want more, as always with your scrumptious words.
AnotherSilentObserver chapter 2 . 8/8/2018
This is beautifully written and pretty aligned with Leroux (you should write more in that vain). I loved the way you depict each character's emotions, and the micro-twists in the story. And what an Erik thing to say, that last line!
jennyfair chapter 2 . 3/23/2018
One of the things I enjoy most about this story is Christine consciously forcing herself to face what's happening, even as she wishes that she could escape or for someone else to make all of the decisions, as they have before. Gah the moment she finally embraces him is so deliciously tense, and then they have to go and ruin it with all of their doubts and miscommunications. Erik saying that he was going to allow her to deceive him just breaks my heart! I realize that it's been 12 years since you updated this story, but I would love to see you come back to it and post the third chapter.
jennyfair chapter 1 . 3/23/2018
Poor Christine! Berating herself already and then having to endure Erik listing out all her sins against him. Yet also poor Erik, so weary and defeated yet still wanting her desperately. You're so good at developing tension between your characters!
Not A Ghost3 chapter 2 . 9/12/2017
I need the last part! You are a magnificent writer!
Rainbow Pierrot chapter 2 . 1/16/2017
I would absolutely love to see this continued!
Riene chapter 2 . 6/21/2016
What a harsh ending line.

His conversation is superbly done here. Bitter, dry, fell of self-loathing, reining in his anger toward her, but still so desperately hoping.

VC, you have to complete this...
Guest chapter 2 . 3/2/2016
dude you gotta finish this! t's amazing!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2015
I want to read another chapter!
I'm dying to know what will happen!
LaurenvBelladonna chapter 2 . 1/13/2015
Oh my god. You need to update this. This is so beautiful!
fish h chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
my God. Perfectly written. Please, it's just one more chapter. It will haunt me, I assure you.
inactiveeustacescrubbs chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
oh no, i just read this and there's been seven years with no update. the curse of
hcileh chapter 2 . 6/14/2013
Oh, wow. That was absolutely wonderful! I wish so much it was finished. But still, thanks for sharing this story! And I hope the next chapter of "Volee" comes soon :D
Skyeward MusicLover chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
Alice chapter 2 . 4/25/2012
would. you. please. just. finish. ONE.

JUST ONE of your stories, please. that's all I ask for!

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