Reviews for m001: FULLMETAL
edris chapter 19 . 10/2/2016
Ok, first can I just say I love this AU? The creativity is amazing, I never realized how well Chobits could fit with Fullmetal Alchemist of all things. This is honestly one of the best crossover fics I have read. Not to mention your plot and characterization is amazing, ok, especially Ed and Roy. How you manage to keep Ed IC while still remaining v different from canon, and a persocom is astounding. Also, I REALLY love how you wrote Winry, so many people tend to mess her character up (and her being obsessed w persocoms and wanting to take Ed apart is a genius idea to her canon counterpart w her automail obsession). Also,the development in this fic is probably some of the best out there- Ed and Roy's relationship, Roy especially going from a (perverted) bastard to a caring bastard (ah, he's getting there XD). Not to mention the development in your own writing is seriously inspiring to me. The references to the actual anime in here are also great, like Roy having his team in disguises as each other? It reminds me of parts in the 2003/2005 anime XD
Anyways, I know you haven't updated in a long time, but I wanna let you know that I appreciate you writing this fic, and sticking with it since 2005 o.o most people abandon their fics after about two or three years.
Sorry my review is so long rip, but thanks for writing this, I hope you have a good day/night! :D
HortenseCortes chapter 19 . 7/9/2016
Lol I have to delete and write it back because I writted in french so : too bad it was never over
If you read this, I hope you're well )
apolausta chapter 19 . 5/15/2016
Okay, so I know that this is on long hiatus and I know that it's already been almost three years, but that doesn't matter, because more than anything I just wanted to let you know that this is an amazing piece of work, and thank you so much for writing it. I love it, ahhh! Chobits is an old love of mine (maybe not quite age appropriate at the time, but regardless), and FMA is one of my current obsessions, so reading thing really gave me so much nostalgia. And you've adapted the universe so well! I know Ed as a persocom, and his development into something that really is human.

Honestly, the only caveat I have with this story is all the lost potential. But while that's true - I don't know you or your life so obviously I absolutely don't blame you for not updating haha. Goodness knows I myself am not great at that. Thank you for writing what you already have, and if you ever choose to update in the future, I for one will be over the moon.

(Also Elicia as a persocom/Plum is such an adorable idea, I can totally see it! And I'm curious about what you had planned about the Seven Sins, ooh. And as always, Hawkeye is badass af 3)
xx chapter 19 . 6/28/2015
Please, update, i want to know what Will happen next :-) i usualy don't Like this pairing , but i surly Like your fanfiction. It's damn interesting :-D especially i want to know why was ed created and when Will al appeared.
So please, continue with this. :-)
Guest chapter 10 . 3/24/2014
Just keep it parental please?
Guest chapter 19 . 3/13/2014
*snorts* Yeah, and it's almost been another year. But I can't really complain about the length of this chapter...
f.tastarossa chapter 3 . 12/26/2013
I canr help getting excited!
MARYLOVER chapter 19 . 6/2/2013
So this lovely fic was not forgotten and now it's been updated, I'm very glad you're continuing the story. What else can I say? you've said almost everything on your final note, their relationship has escalated into something more than just parental, it's just they haven't realized yet.

Nice this fic will have some adventure, I'd like it to have some intrigue and humor and Edward learning more, not only about himself but new things in general.

And now Roy is in his thirties? okay, seems reasonable.

You take care too! Bye
mamita chapter 19 . 5/31/2013
Hello, I liked your fic, I hope you upload more chapters, mostly because I love Edward, and the couple RoyxEd, love together, especially couples, hopefully do more fics of them, keep it up, thank you and kisses.
Hell Sword chapter 19 . 5/21/2013
i love your making more chapters yay :)
love the story up to now.
Are you going to have Al in it?
Featherstone180 chapter 19 . 5/19/2013
Brilliant writing. I finished this in less than a day, refusing to do anything until I caught myself up. :) I am happy to say that I am glad that I did. I'm going to get some sleep now... Zzzzzz
Amaya Zorifuki chapter 19 . 5/17/2013
Woah! I can't believe you still remember this fic after all this time. That's amazing, good on you sweetie.

I love you in spite of the years gone by, you were able to pick right back up without me getting stuck and having to look back on anything. I remembered everything I needed to remember.
EdwardXLuna chapter 13 . 4/14/2013
Please make some more chapters please! i love this story :3
Thief of Black Winged Hearts chapter 18 . 7/24/2012
Wow, this story is amazing! Please continue, I beg you!
LeFay Strent chapter 18 . 6/21/2012
I KNEW it was Armstrong in the Santa suit! haha! I love love love love LOVE this chapter! Hell, I love this whole freaking story! I noticed that it hasn't been updated in years and I just want to let you know that I hope it changes soon. This really is a brilliant story and it fascinates me. Please don't let it end here cause Ed and Roy's relationship was just getting good! Please update soon.
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