Reviews for Something Unpredictable
PrttyinPink89 chapter 3 . 11/8/2012
I'm so sad you never did Luke's part of the story like you said you would.
destiny062 chapter 3 . 3/27/2009

this story is really good so far. i really like the fact that the different chapters are different people's points of views. it makes it different to other stories, but a good different though.

keep writing, look forward to reading more soon.

"FanFiction is a really good distraction from the sometimes harshness of reality."- destiny062
penguinopus chapter 3 . 6/23/2007
What a shame that you haven't continued this story. You've done a beautiful job expressing the personalities of the characters. I would love to hear the Luke side of things. Your portrayals of Luke in other stories have been great - you give his character so much depth.
GregorySmithIsGorgeous22 chapter 3 . 4/30/2006
aw i love it! continue plz!
Katydid1388 chapter 3 . 3/19/2006
wow! this story is amazing! i wish this would have happened on the show! i can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Eleanor J chapter 3 . 3/14/2006
OMG. I wish you were writing this season. We would have these wonderful moments of April trying to fit in, without Luke being a big ol' dumbass.
Ronata chapter 2 . 1/29/2006
i am so excited to see that you plan on continuing this story. once again it was an amazing chapter. you somehow manage to always capture the essence of each character and i feel like i am inside their heads.

great job, i cant wait for the rest
Krys33 chapter 2 . 1/24/2006
Aw... Luke/Rory fluff *never* gets old.

I loved this. Yet again, I found myself tearing up. And I'm glad you did this POV, too, because we got to see a little of the fatherly Luke when he was with just Rory, too. I can't wait to see what's next. I'm hoping for an April POV, just to know what she's thinking, but... I'll be happy with anything.

Keep up the good work!

sarah chapter 2 . 1/24/2006
i loved the POV you used it was great
Jaigagne chapter 2 . 1/23/2006
I never thought i could enjoy Rory's POV as much as I did just now. It's usually riddeled with Logan or Dean or some kind of scandle, it's not her fault, it's just how it goes. But this! Oh yes this. It's every thing that it should be and more Words can't describe much more.

J.Stone chapter 2 . 1/22/2006
This is off the board awsome. Fantastic job. I really like the fact you didnt have Rory call Luke Dad. I like that in some fics, but it just didnt fit here. The contrast between chapter one and two is nice. Taking what Lorelai thought Rory was thinking, in chapter 1 and setting the record straight in chapter 2 was very well done. She was right, but not right on.

Thanks very much.

Eleanor J chapter 2 . 1/22/2006
I loved the line about Richard and Emily being the good grandparents. Very sweet. I loved the bonding between Rory and April.
ProFfeSseR chapter 2 . 1/22/2006
I thought it was finished, but I'm glad it continued. Really awesome chapter and I can't wait to read more!
Ronata chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
hey, this was an awesome story. by far the best one that features April. you made me realise that lorelai wont be the one to bare lukes first child anymore and now im sad :-( but i do hope things work out well like they did in your story

thanks a bunch

ProFfeSseR chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
(written Dec. 20) Once again you managed to write the perfect story! You know how to project Lorelai’s feelings and those of Luke in such a way they are very realistic. That’s a great ability! I haven’t read much stories about Lorelai finding out about April, but of the once I read, yours is definitely the best! The lyrics of Good Riddance (Time of your life) by Greenday makes me want to hear the song again. Unfortunately I don’t have it on my laptop, but at my computer at home. But I’ll be going home on Friday for Christmas, and most likely I will not only listen to the song when I remember this story, but also watch the episode where Scott Anspaugh dies, since I have every ER episode on SVCD. And they fit in the story perfectly, so it was a good choice!
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