|Reviews for Sine Qua Non: Sequel to Quid Pro Quo|
| EmmyAngel chapter 11 . 1/26/2006
Whoo! I feel better, now.
I can't say I'm . . . *quite* worried. Yet.
Must be the "die to live" thing. Very Biblical.
The god-idiot (will he get an official name before the end?) being happy makes me a *teensy* bit nervous, but bad guys tend to be dumbasses, so I'm gonna assume his butt's about to get kicked. (hint, HINT!) Maybe Mom and Dad? Or Jess? That'd be cool! Or cheesey . . .
Maybe we'll see the gatekeeper again. (Or the Keymaster . . . Ugh!)
| HealerAriel chapter 11 . 1/26/2006
But... but... but... *stammers* You can't just... But they... GAH!
| HealerAriel chapter 10 . 1/26/2006
...Why am I getting the feeling he wanted both of them all along? I don't trust him...
| Bards of Bedlam chapter 11 . 1/26/2006
Is...that the end? Okay... I'm gonna go cry now...
| Aira Silver chapter 11 . 1/26/2006
What the hell? Is he smiling because he got two souls for the price of one? Or for a different reason all together? Well whatever reason it is I can't wait for the next(and if I'm right) last chapter.
| Mistro and Daquiri chapter 11 . 1/26/2006
Pixel, how could you! That's absolutely horrible - how could you kill them? I can honestly say that I didn't see that one comming. The battle with the god, yes (we just knew it had to happen sometime soon), but them dying as a result of the fighting? Never. The only consolation is that they died together. That's the only way I could actually see it happening in the show - Sam and Dean can only actually die if it's together kicking something's ass. None of this alone in a nursing home crap - Dean'd never go for it.
Anyways, that totally got tears flowing. As soon as it became apparent that they were really gonna die (I was in denial until the bitter end), the tears started falling. I found it especially sad how Dean forced himself to hold on for just long enough that he could make sure Sammy was ok; that Sam wouldn't have to see him die. Even though Dean clearly should have been the first to die, based on his injuries and such. It was just so sad, and sweet, and undeniably Dean (100% canon!), that he was willing to prolong his pain just to spare his brother some. And I'm glad he died holding Sammy - I really wouldn't want it any other way.
Wow. That said and done with, I'm not sure what else to say. *Entire fanfiction world gets hopeful looks on their faces*
Ok, I thought of something. *A collective crestfallen sigh* They'd better come back! Because they're just not allowed to go down without a fight. Kicking and screaming is more like it. Not that I ever thought even for a second that we were never going to see them again, it's just that ... Hey! I just came up with an idea! Maybe, if they kick up a big enough fuss (haha, I just thought of that song "Raise a Little Hell". How fitting), then friggin' whatshisname will get so sick fo them, that he'll have to send them back to the land of the living (no longer having the ability to kill them)! Probably not, but oh-well.
Oh, speaking of the god guy, WHAT A BASTARD! First of all, he comes and invades their lives. Then he makes them some stupid deal that he doesn't keep to (because he's doing Sam a "favour"). Then he procedes to murder them when they're just trying to find a way out of the mess that HE created. Can't he see how much they love eachother? Doesn't he know that brotherly love shall prevale? Apparently not. Asshole.
*I'm trying for my longest review yet!*
Oh, and I really like how Dean fought him at the beginning, and then snuck up behind him with the knife; good times! Oh yeah, and I was also gonna say "So they shoot this guy with rocksalt and silver bullets and nothing happens. And then Dean stabs him in the skull with a hidden knife, and he's suddenly dying? WHAT?" But then I thought to myself that before, his attention was focused on Dean and what he was doing. And now it was focused on Sam, so Dean could sneak up on him. And then he healed himself a little bit after. That fixes everything.
Ok, I'm done. I think. Anyways, I was going to PM, but with their apparent word limits and stuff, I'm just gonna leave a good old-fashioned review. And I'm gonna make it just as long as I want; seeing as you liked the wordy ones and...screw Mistro!
Anyways, the next chapter had really better be friggin' soon! I can't wait!
PS - 617 words. Close, but no cigar.
| ChaiGrl chapter 11 . 1/25/2006
OMG! Tears are just flowing right now. Lol. That was an amazing emotional chapter. Beautifuly written. I cannot wait at all until the next update. I can't even imagine what you will come up with. Keep up the AMAZING writing! Until your next update, Happy Writing! Please update soon. :)
| geminigrl11 chapter 11 . 1/25/2006
This? Is absolutely breathtaking. This whole story has been so unique and so well-told. But this chapter surpasses everything. Simply flawless. I can't wait for you to continue.
| Ghostwriter chapter 11 . 1/25/2006
Uh, Mary's not gonna like this. We saw how scary and protective she got in "Home". What makes this god think it won't happen again? Great job by the way. Catch ya on the flip side.
| Violet Eternity chapter 11 . 1/25/2006
Oh. My. God. Freaking. Update!
| Stefanie Dale chapter 11 . 1/25/2006
...oh, my God.
Yeah, that's about it...
Stunned "Oh my God, I can't believe you just DID that!" silence on this end...
I can't even begin to guess which way this is going to go now. Well, I *could,* but it would only end up about as tangled and with as many rambled ends as a tangled fishing net...
| supernaturalfan0718 chapter 11 . 1/25/2006
omg you killed them both please say it isnt so!
| canuck12 chapter 11 . 1/25/2006
Whoa, that was beautiful and heartwrenching at the same time - you've got a gift my friend ;) That was a pretty intense chapter, I'm really into this, I can't wait for more :)
You've really got me into this reviewing thing, I think your the one person I do this the most for :)
| Adara'chan15 chapter 11 . 1/25/2006
...OMG THAT WAS SO SAD! *cries* But it was also...perfect, in its own way. Hey, are you gonna do an epilogue? Where they're on the other side? With brotherly fluff? Please?
| eddy6401 chapter 10 . 1/24/2006
poor guys, can't get a break!