|Reviews for The Assistant|
| Guest chapter 31 . 11/24/2013
Ahahah i love the little Skit at the end . All in all it was a good story :)
| Kirida chapter 31 . 10/8/2012
Loved it, so much.
| JoJoSmiley chapter 19 . 9/3/2012
in this chapter Kagome Says Something About How Sango Not Being As Lecherous Before Marrying Miroku, But Just A Few Chapters Ago Kagome Didn't Even Know That Miroku Was Sango's Husband. When Did She Find Out?
| JoJoSmiley chapter 18 . 9/3/2012
Ummm, Yuu Had Ayame Quit Her Job As Kouga's Assistant At The Howling Inc. Ball... So Why is She Still Working As His Assisstant..?
| Me chapter 31 . 12/4/2011
Definitely should have ended intact chapter thirty. That last chapter killed it.
| Me chapter 30 . 12/4/2011
Shoulda ended it there
| darkdreamer07 chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Wow I loved what you did with the characters. Great story so far. The only problem was with grammar andd spelling but other than that I loved it. :)
| FemaleSherlock chapter 31 . 3/27/2011
I thik I'm crying (shedding tears) What an awesome ending. (smiling through tears)
| FemaleSherlock chapter 24 . 3/27/2011
hojo's a TEME (bastard in Japanese)! Anyway good story. One of my favorites.
| Mad Optimistic Pessimist chapter 3 . 12/23/2010
love the story so far!
| Dagger-Seishin chapter 31 . 10/6/2010
i still LOVE this story :):):):):)
| PreciousRaymond chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
okay, so far I like the story, but one thing I want to point out. The fact that Sesshomaru's secretary gossiped about Kagome and told him stuff like she's a virgin, ex-boyfriend tried to rape her, etc. That isn't something that should be done. You also mentioned early in the chapter that she didn't want to gossip about Kagome to her boss, but she obviously did. So, that just didn't make sense. I think it would have been more fasinating if he had found out on his own about everything, then everything being told to him all at once. Also, telling your boss that kind of stuff, attempted rape, being a virgin, that's personal stuff and if I ever had a friend do that, not even just a boss even just someone I don't know or aren't close with, that friend would be bitched out. That is personal stuff, you just don't gossip about that to your boss who might hire your friend, that's something that is gossiped about within a group of friends and that's if it doesn't bother the said friend.
| Black Light Brightness chapter 31 . 7/12/2010
That was a VERY good story! the one thing I think it was missing was some more reflection into the Dragon Queen. It was difficult at times for me to decide whether or not Kagome having an (for lack of better terms) alternate persona was important to the development of the relationships in the story. You always brought it up at times when it seemed it would make a difference but didn't (in my opinion) allow the reader enough insight into the darker, more secretive side of the Dragon Queen for me to say that it truly had enough barring on who she is today.
Other than that I thought that the story was AWESOME! the characters each had a distinct and different relationship with one another and the plot flowed nicely! _ so despite the fact that my criticism blob is bigger than my praise blob, i LUURRRVED it! _
| 0hDarling chapter 31 . 6/15/2010
LOVED EVERY WORD OF THIS STORY! It's amazin and with the ups and downs, it made it very interesting...! Keep writting :P
| Sesshoumaru'sPriestess chapter 31 . 6/8/2010
O...M...G...WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW! This story was well written and so detailed. It blew me away! Everybody ended up getting JUST what they deserved. Happiness for Sess/Kags Inu Mir/San Rin and Shipp...the whole crew and of course Kinky-ho got her punishment with a bit of redemption so bravo to you for being kind. Naraku, Koga and Hojo...*chuckles* you did a nice number with them. Excellent and I will definitely be adding you as a new fav author to watch!