Reviews for Embrassez Moi
teddyscare chapter 3 . 1/15/2006
plz plz plz plz UPDATE! thx
iamsheena chapter 3 . 1/4/2006
What a wonderful story so far, I am looking forward to more!
xXxSoratoxXx65 chapter 3 . 12/30/2005
Woo hoo! great story! I'm glad Joey came back! _ Update soon kk'z? Meeh yur number one fan! lolz
Moppy chapter 3 . 12/26/2005
yay mini sorato LOL hehe bring on the flirting!, gold coast YAY. i read that little statement about the sydney people can be discriminating bit, since the race wars started people have become more open about racsim but most sydney people are nice.
Asuna chapter 3 . 12/26/2005
Hey Ari,

You made Matt sort of dark and I didn't expect Lin to be dating Akira. The mini-Sorato was sort of awesome and you based it on the place you live... *gasp* you don't even know who lives where Matt lives. Please update soon, girlie or I'll come over your place and get your butt up to date, lolz
Asuna chapter 2 . 12/26/2005
Hi Ari,

You really shouldn't stay up so late... It's not good for you, even if you are insomniac. You should try your best to go to sleep; even if you can't. This Akira guy seems to be quite close to Sora... Well onto next chapter and you better update soon *gives a fierce look*
Asuna chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
Hey Ari,

You told me about this story before School was out and now I decided to read it.

Nice story so far! Tho this type of design is quite weird... Did Joey help you? Well I love how you based some of it on our school but you didn't say anything about the school walls being green XD Well now I'm gonna go to the next chapter.
nickygirl chapter 3 . 12/25/2005
wait... does he like really live next to her. and how evil is he going to get. can't wait...
SaffireStarz chapter 2 . 12/24/2005
ooh...this chapter is good despite your want of sleep. lol.

i like how you made Akira protective of her...that kinda already tells me that she's gonna get along well with everyone...i think.

i think this was pretty good...every chapter leads to the next part

good. good. good.

hope u find ur inspiration soon...i hope i find mine soon too.

ok. well Joyeux Noel...Merry Christmas. Happy Holidays if you prefer. But Happy New Year!


Moppy chapter 2 . 12/21/2005
oh damn Yama taking evil whats-ya-ma-call-it DARE thats the word Akira is creapy how does it add out...Sora has never had a BF and Akira knows her long lost syblings? 3AM! DUDE THATS LATE oh well its too hot to sleep no one slept last night update soon
SaffireStarz chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Wow Ari,

can't wait to see what this will be about. I'd love to find out what's in that head of yours right now. lol.

ok, first off, the Title. KAWAII! i don't know much french but i know a little. Embrassez Moi...something me. Embrassez means like hug (embrace) i think. idk, a guess. and moi mean me. Hug Me? Kiss Me? something like that. i was also thinking love me...but love is Amour.

Bankstown HS...i was starting to thinking it was either yours or someone you know's school or something. (cuz it's in Sydney, lol) *whoot* i'm making educated guesses here. lol. thanks for telling us though...

i'm kinda confused but that's ok since it's only first chapter. at one moment, sora is fonding over him (what a pretty boy) and the next, she just says "bye" to him (nice talking to you, gotta go) hmm...maybe it's cuz she wants to leave class already.

seriously! i wanna know what's gonna happen update soon ya hear me? lol.

k, Merry X-MAS! & Happy New Year...


"Soar the Sky"
Kat chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
WO I can alreasy tell Im gonna love love love this fic, update soon!

Moppy chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Hello good story no mistakes definatly needs to be longer. Im from Sydeny too Mount Saint Benedicts College in Pennant Hills! yipee. i like the French title Embrassez Moi (Kiss me) cant wait for next chapter hope you update soon
Yamora Love n Friendship chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
this looks like it will be a good story but it was a little bit of a slow start but i liked it so keep writing.
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