|Reviews for Save me|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Very interesting! I'm excited for new chapters. (: Please continue.
| Karlamity chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
Very well written story! I wasn't expecting any of what happened, Hermione killing her father, Harry and Ron abandoning her, the lightning bolt Im curious as to why Lavender decided she had the right to slap Hermione though also Im insanely curious about who just knocked her out and about what's really going on! I look forward to the future chapters!
Update soon please :)
| SexySelena666 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Oooohhh I'm liking this idea! I sure hope you update soon!
| AyaMae91 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Interesting idea. Definitely worth continuing! I'd love to see where you take this. I think it's unfair that everyone has abandoned her though. I can't really imagine that harry and ron, especially Harry though, would do that to her.
Anyway, good start so far!
| Hylia'grace chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
I think this is quite good
There's still two or so first person terms
My room and myself I think but otherwise good story
Nice to see a strong independent hermione and I like your portrayal of abuse and the sighting behind when the abused finally snaps
She seems better for it
If not badder, I sense somethings wrong with her other than the personality change
Strange dreams and pale eyes
Great though, I'm looking forward to reading more, whichever direction you decide to take it :)
| LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 12 . 10/5/2008
that was great
| Zarroc chapter 12 . 10/2/2008
wonder whats going to happen next...
| coolcatt002 chapter 11 . 7/19/2007
i really like this story. but what bugs me is that it is all in bold. why did you do that
| Zarroc chapter 11 . 7/19/2007
eek! she can't kill Draco!
update soon please, let us know what happens!
| bek chapter 11 . 5/25/2007
aw i love this story
| pstibbons chapter 11 . 3/30/2007
Glad you're in love - it's cool. Good luck with the other half of it :)
Suggestions for writers block
- really guilt trip Harry and Ron for this one - especially Harry. I mean, we expect Ron to always betray HErmione because he's a natural-born git, but we'd expect Harry to stick by her like she's always stuck by him. But no, he just had to be all male and stick by his male friend instead of by his female friend (just like in the Yule Ball)
- have Hermione move away from Harry and Ron and become friends with others - Ravenclaws like Padma and Terry, say - perhaps she could ask to be resorted into Ravenclaw (I've never seen that done before in fanfiction)
- meanwhile, have Harry try to make friends with Hermione... she only does so when he publicly pushes himself away from Ron... then Ron does what we all expect him to do and becomes a Death Eater...
- If you want to do Draco/Hermione, that's cool (anything but Ron/Hermione!) - it sounds like that's what you're aiming for anyway. But have Draco be the one who chases Hermione, not vice versa. She must be the one in control. (Funny, I suppose I'm betraying my side of the gender line here!)
- Luna would make a Powerful Seer Friend for Hermione. And Luna offers ample opportunity for comic relief.
| pstibbons chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
| fiatluxanna chapter 11 . 3/23/2007
it's a cliff hanger!
well... i respect your' desicion as much as i disagree with it ;)
i really liked what you had going there!
| polka-dotted-coffee-cups chapter 2 . 3/7/2007
i know the last time you updated was like forever ago and i have already read the chapters here and reviewed. Since i can't review on the same chapter twice, i decided to use the ones that i hadn't reviewed on. please update!
| polka-dotted-coffee-cups chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
PLEASE update, I would like to know what happens!