Reviews for Who’s That Kissing Riza Under The Mistletoe
KratinLeagogh15 chapter 4 . 9/21/2012
well this sucks
first lieutenant riza hawkeye chapter 4 . 7/27/2009
i dont get it? did they get married or something?
darkflame666 chapter 3 . 2/1/2008
cute story, but i couldn't get why this was rated M...

and some of the spelling's wrong...
Danacyrus chapter 4 . 6/24/2007
Twas a great story... untill it ended. That made me sad :'(

Cause it was really good!

Still. I love it!
Kurissyma san Tybalt chapter 4 . 6/12/2007
Do I wanna know why you kept getting grounded? Never mind P Awesome story- a really adorable idea, and so Havoc & Maes... I am so inconsistent with first and last names... lol P

Xx-Bex-xX
Kurissyma san Tybalt chapter 3 . 6/12/2007
Haha! Good ol' Dad. Always good for a laugh P

I don't really care, for the sake of the fic, but you might want to know that her father is dead, if you didn't already. Roy was his apprentice and watched him die. He called out, Riza ran in, horrified. Later, he organised the funeral, which they attended together. That's where she told him about her father's research into flame alchemy- the array that was etched/tattooed/? on her back and entrusted him with the power that killed all those people in Ishbal, which is where he went next. They met up again in Ishbal, him as a major(?) and her as a sniper. At the end of the war, she applied for the position as his aide and swore to protect him. He told her that if his goals were ever to prove impure, she should shoot him. She agreed. End flashback. If you already knew, it's cool- it's creative license, after all P
rocker4ever chapter 4 . 1/8/2007
Ok,

A. This story had way too many typos

B. I think this rating should go down to T

and

C. This story was damn funny.

I liked it lots _

KimiRox (Roy's Niece *noquestionsasked*)
Jenn chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
Ok. Use spellcheck or a proofreader or something. Almost every word in the this thing is spelled wrong. Sweet Fanfic lord.
Risamylovly chapter 4 . 10/25/2006
i realy liked it good work and thanks
Jes chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
I just wanna start by saying I love your story ideas but I think you need a little work on your writing. I know it's not really my place to say that but just think of it is constructive criticism. I think that you just may need to be more descriptive and stylize a bit more. Your writing seems a bit choppy if you can see what I'm saying. I'm not trying to be mean I'm just giving you a hint that may help draw readers into your story more, but besides that I think your stories are awesome!
Andi chapter 4 . 7/13/2006
It was a lil confusing and there were some spelling and grammar errors but overall it was very cute! That was a cute story!
Claes Winterspell chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Interesting...
Sayomi XD chapter 4 . 6/24/2006
wut can i say when ur stories r so good. I love it!
Unexpected Hopeless Romantic chapter 4 . 6/9/2006
i love this story..this stories is one of the best i read!wah..i love it so much!
Alatre chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
Great, yes, no, and very sexy. hahha Ok I am not so sure about that last one but your screen name is sexy haha. This could be fun I want to know how the getting hit by a car thing was Roy's fault.
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