|Reviews for Timesplitters 2|
| sirkibble2 chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Your descriptions are nice but the overall chapter was uninteresting. You tell the events of the game verbatim. There's nothing really interesting to read about that.
In a novelization, you definitely have to add your feel and story to it without losing the overall feeling of the game.
Since I write novelizations myself, I'd like to see where you go with this. I'm actually in the process of writing this in a novelization also. I'll keep reading.
| The Inimitable Enigma Cypher chapter 2 . 11/26/2006
Not bad, not bad at all. Big fan of the game(the second one), had to check and see if anyone was writing about it. I'm liking your story.
| analnomous chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
um... i don't know about you, but i think this story is familier, at least this chapter...
| My name is -insert name here chapter 2 . 2/14/2006
I'm lovin' it! You are great! Keep that magic flowin'
| My name is -insert name here chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Great description of opening cutscene in TS2 (the greatest game ever) Can't wait tell next level! Planet X I presume?
| Lady of the Sith chapter 2 . 1/2/2006
OMFG, I was going to do something like this x.x I was going to do all the levels from TS2 in story form! I got through Chicago and was working on Notre Dame :P
The point is, whoa, and this is really good! Just make sure you check your grammar and spelling of certain characters' names or what they say, just for perfection o.O I know, I sound like a perfectionist... I am, aren't I sad...
| Stupidfic chapter 2 . 12/29/2005
nice job, but the one guy in the begining of chapter 2 is Sgt. Shivers, not Sgt. Shock
| the ultimate SoBe Master chapter 2 . 12/25/2005
awesome fanfic so far! please continue!