Oh I so loved this story! Sweetly amusing, wonderfully hilarious, heartwarmingly tear-jerker, all rolled into one! Wonderful job, author!

Oh this is so amusingly sweet! I'm really loving this... Good job!

IT WAS BEAUTIFULLLLLLL!

That was wonderful! I cant believe soft stories made me cry more... ️

This is a really bizarre story. The first chapter however made me curious enough to read on so far. Next chapter has got to be better than the ones before, otherwise I will give up on this far out there story. However I have to give the writer credit for creating a completely different kind of plot, than I have ever seen: bizarre, weird and totally ooc but very original.

Oh dear... what to say? This was an amazing combination of a great plot and competent writing, something you don't see much of on this site. I loved it!

Wow! I loved this fic so much. It's such an interesting concept, and even though I've read a couple of fics with this sort of idea, your's is probably the best out of all of them! Bravo!

i feel like draco wouldn't talk to his mother like that cuz, u know, the pureblood sh!t and representing ur family and all, but i guess its cuz this fic is more easy caring but then he did bring up "hermione was always in the light, while he remained forever in the shadows until he died, calling her name with his last breath." which is dark, so i don't get it. ;-;

...that is the weirdest, most horrible charm invented in the history of witchcraft and wizardry.

ummm...i'm so confused...so, hermione was naked at some pool, which was only draco's imagination, but then it was real and he held her in his arms, and now he's about to drown...?

good job, malfoy. dumbledore's getting sex ed. ideas.

i read the first sentence and had to come down here; draco's name is draco lucius malfoy, not draco black malfoy.

plz tell me he's married to hermione...

YES I LOVE THIS

I did not anticipate this being so beautiful and funny :) hope you see this review and know how many years later your story is still being enjoyed