Reviews for Fullmetal Alchemist: The Gate of Shambala
Gwntan12 chapter 2 . 11/25/2016
Idiot. He's an idiot for screaming how he wasn't short.
Q-A the Authoress chapter 17 . 9/7/2015
Now that's a happy ending worthy of the manga and Brotherhood.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Q-A the Authoress chapter 2 . 9/7/2015
Ed, you're an idiot.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Robert chapter 17 . 3/28/2015
It's over already!?
Krisaki chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
About the red water, they did mention it in the series, I think the episodes were called, The Other Elric Brothers. It came from the 2003 anime and it took place in a town called Xenotime. I believe the two people posing as Ed and Al were Russel and Fletcher Tringham. I'm a serious fan of FMA, so I watched the entirety of both Brotherhood and the first, but I might be sketchy with these details since I'm doing it solely on memory.
dullaznboi chapter 17 . 10/22/2011
damn... when I read this that was all I could say. This story was amazing in my opinion and would've been the best follow up to COS. I personally hated the ending and this story really gave me closure. So detailed and vivid... Nice work man. They really should turn this into a movie and I will be one of the many waiting in line on opening night!
AmiiceeLokei chapter 17 . 7/6/2011
3 Thankyou. You gave me closure I really needed :) wonderful story.
XxCamui chapter 17 . 4/19/2010
Your story was really good, and i really liked the writing :)

umm for anyone interested my friend has a fullmetal alchemist rpg site that lets you become a state alchemist or soldier and do stuff like join! heres the link: fullmetalalchemist13./
goldacharmed chapter 17 . 2/23/2010
I hope you realize that you have just created the best Fullmetal story EVER! I'd just thought I'd let you know. I've told people before that they SHOULD go pro. But you really NEED to. Please do the world a favor and become an another. It's your calling without any doubt. I can't find the words to say how great this story is. The whole time it felt like I was reading a real book and not a fan fiction. I wish you could publish this. I loved the story line, and how you still manged to keep everything within all the rules of the original, including the perfect never once out of character, characters. I love how you re-wrote the ending of the movie. I love how you played everything out and reveled everything exactly when it was perfect to be reveled. This can't be any better, so if you thinking it can, that's a road to no where. Don't ever stop writing, because judging from this, you have all the makings of a real true and great writer. ( mutters off into to nothingness) Wow, just wow, wow...
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 17 . 11/7/2009

i love how you ended the story!

you used the dream sequence that ed had in the beginning of the story! i loved how you arranged the plot; there's nothing out of place and you covered everything so wonderfully. this is truly a remarkable piece of literary art!

it's rare for me to come across stories like this, but upon reading your work, i have no regrets. in fact, i'm very glad i was able to read this!

i loved how detailed you were in the war scenes of the story, helping us readers in stimulating our imagination and picture out the different scenes effectively. the strategies used, different twists and turns in the story, and how the battles took place and succeeded were very much clear in your writing. you're very descriptive in your work, but you still managed to keep things easy to comprehend. nothing was exagerated and really kept things simple so readers can appreciate your work more. this is one of the stories i rarely find that has so much depth and significance that i actually thought this was part of the original plot in the FMA series. what an excellent work! i applaud you for a job wonderfully done! thank you for sharing this!
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 15 . 11/7/2009
An EdWin and RoyAi chapter! Nice!

Wow...i really love how things are going here...this is one of the stories that i truly fell in love with! so beautiful...

BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 8 . 11/6/2009

no way?

gosh...i really need to continue reading this...

the story's getting pretty intense! i love it!
marveilles chapter 17 . 7/24/2009
ITS... BEAUTIFUL. I love the ending so much! yes! ed should be with winry! and al had one too! yeyeyeyeyeyey
funvince chapter 17 . 5/3/2009
This was a great story. Just what I was in the mood for after watching the FMA movie. I'm intrigued by your idea of ridding both worlds of alchemy. On the one hand, the regulator exists for a reason I would think and alchemy was such a useful power. On the other hand, you had a good point with the destruction and avarice the Philosopher's Stone had created.

It's good to see Ed and Winry get their happy ending.
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