Reviews for Sweet Sixteen
Emperor DeLacus chapter 4 . 4/24/2014
This is interesting, and I'm looking forward to more! :D
Aww, poor doggy . . . Dx
Merlinspants chapter 4 . 8/11/2012
rehtaehwashere chapter 4 . 4/2/2008
I lurve your story. Tis really good... Poor Milo...
TheInvincibleKay chapter 4 . 12/14/2007
Haha! Thats great! I love it!
deletedaccount999 chapter 4 . 5/1/2007
This is the funniest chapter! I LOVE Legolas. I can imagine him (muscle twitching *heehee*) The best way to annoy someone. You should see my dad when i do it (which is fairly often)

Also what does porcrasintate mean?

Please update soon.

~Voronda Herenya
deletedaccount999 chapter 3 . 5/1/2007
Poor Milo! This chapter is great (and sad) but still funny. I would be SO angry at Legolas if he killed my dog (even though he's my fave character)

The Pacifier is a great movie.

~Voronda Herenya
deletedaccount999 chapter 2 . 5/1/2007
It's a cliffy! Hee hee. Your story's really funny, cept for the end cos' it makes me want to skip reviewing and just go onto the next chapter (but I LIKE scooby snacks)

I really like the plotline, gripping but funny too!

YAY! Next chapter here we come!
deletedaccount999 chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
Great fic! It's not really mary-sue cos' you have all the A/Ns (which is a really good idea because they add humour to the story.

Ellie and I are kindred spirits becuase I always do embarassing stuff in front of people and never do it when i'm alone. And it's not often people manage to fall UP the stairs (though i have. Twice.)

I like the uniforms (cos' most of the time characters don't wear them, and it makes the fic more realistic) and the way you introduce Ellie sound like she's going to learn from her experiences and grow etc (I sound like my English teacher) so unlike most Mary-sues she has room for improvement which will make the entire story really interesting.

~Voronda Herenya
hermonine chapter 4 . 1/5/2007
Great story. Poor Milo...I would be really mad at Legolas too...if he killed my dog. I look forward to your future chapters. Keep up the good work and update soon!
silver sliver chapter 4 . 6/28/2006
lol! haha, thats one of my favourite games too! lol... *squinty eyes at legolas* if he killed my dog.. oh, he would regret it! please tell me shes going to slug him or something! he deserves it!

'milo killer'
astraya chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Narnian Sprite chapter 4 . 1/18/2006
Snrk. Long trip for her or Leggie? :D
Cookies-R-Yummy chapter 4 . 1/18/2006
AHAHAHAHAA that was so weird. I liked the "are we there yet?" thing. I have ALWAYS done that going from here (CanadA, BC) to the United States (of AmericA). Its so fun. Great story thingy chapter W/E I ramble it was awesome though just like me bye.
Cookies-R-Yummy chapter 3 . 1/5/2006




KK seriously it was very emotional and I cant wait for the next chappy. I can guess who 'Milo Killer' is. And I've seen 'The Pacifier' so yes I thought the joke was very funny LOL.
Narnian Sprite chapter 3 . 1/3/2006
Hey! Nice job, keep going! Rather original to have her hate Leggie instead of swoon over him.
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