|Reviews for Tears on the Balcony|
| Rowena Pendragon chapter 49 . 5/16
FINALLY! This story has majorly been stressing me out. I think I'll enjoy the sequels more knowing that they are together. They stay together right?
| Rowena Pendragon chapter 32 . 5/15
Finally! Oh, the stress!
| Rowena Pendragon chapter 18 . 5/14
Too much drama for me to handle! But I can't stop reading, haha.
| Rowena Pendragon chapter 17 . 5/14
Ugh! No! I just want them to get together. This is so frustrating. All the back and forths.
| Rowena Pendragon chapter 13 . 5/14
Okay, so the Lily/James fighting all the time drives me nuts, but I really wanted to comment on how much the external war comes into play with the plot. I never really thought about that before, but of course their world would have been just as or even more scary than Harry's. I don't think you overdo it, but you add in enough elements to feel real. I can feel the uncertainty and fear that the characters experience.
| anonymous chapter 49 . 4/29
| WerrnogWeasley96 chapter 50 . 4/20
Oh my goodness. I read this story a long time ago and I came back to it because I remembered how much I loved it, and I completely fell in love with it again. You have the most incredible way of writing that makes me so excited and enthralled by the story. I've been staying up until ridiculous hours in the morning reading this because I could never put it down, I just always wanted to read on and on and on. I found myself having to cover my squeals up so as not to wake anyone when exciting things like kissing happened and I got so so SO excited! It's such an actually phenomenal story and I love it so much, it's definitely one of my favourites on this site, and I can't wait to read the sequels again! Thank you for such an amazing story that in my opinion, JKRowling couldn't have written better. And that's surely saying something! You're fab, this story is fab and I'm just gonna move straight on to the others! 3
| Probie girl1717 chapter 34 . 4/19
LILY AND JAMES BETTER GET TOGETHER IN THE NEXT THREE CHAPTERS OR I WILL SEND THE GIANT SQUID TO EAT YOUR FAMILY
| Probie girl1717 chapter 33 . 4/19
Okay 1) I am super mad you didn't have enough Lily blow up and say something about Her parents not being there and that's why no one would care or something.
2) YOU ENDED A GREAT MOMENT YOU RUSTY PAPERCLIP
3) I love the way you have everyone mostly Sirius react to the slap. How he got UBER pissed at it made me happy
4) PRAISE THE ALMIGHTY BOOK LORD THAT HE KISSED RILEY
| Probie girl1717 chapter 32 . 4/19
| EmilyEv chapter 51 . 4/7
I started to read this story a couple of days ago and I just couldn't stop reading. It was written beautifully, and it really reminded me that not all fanfics are only about sex and have poorly written lust-driven characters with a cleshé storyline. You can really see the quality in this story.
I really loved it and hated it! It was so frusturating when James and Lily kept on bickering / and I even shed tears (more than once!) which I don't often do. And I laughed out loud (I was so happy) when they got together!
| Conflicted chapter 42 . 1/26
I love your writing style, but God is it hard fo read. Lily is a bitch, and I try so hard to like her but it's just so hard to do. And at the same time I can't stop reading your damn story. I feel like I've gotten Stockholm syndrome and I'm just in too deep to quit on the story, because it really frustrates me how drawn out the story is and how inconceivably stupid and annoying the characters are all the time, and yet I still find myself coming back to keep reading. You're a special, twisted kind of evil. I love it. And hate it. You make me bipolar.
| Guest chapter 51 . 1/7
Pretty good, went on a bit though
| Guest chapter 51 . 12/25/2014
I loved your fanfic. I got really into the lives of your characters and i'll start reading the sequel asap :-) thank you for uploading and sharing, keep up the good work!
| Guest chapter 27 . 12/23/2014
I really love this story. I only have one issue and that is that I think all your names are too American. I know that you are American but I feel as though if James had any siblings then they would be called things like Edward, William, George or Arthur or for girls Elizabeth, Anne, Mary or Emily- more traditional British names. Also in the UK the name Riley is predominantly used for males, I've never even heard of a female Riley in this country. Despite this I still really like your writing style and story xxx