Reviews for Tears on the Balcony
laloudu77 chapter 51 . 5/2
Wow, what a story! I don’t know if you’re still reading the reviews, bur this is one of my fav ff ever! I absolutely love Sirius, and the way you describe him is the way I see him too
Bigman123 chapter 3 . 1/28
Oh my god i love this story so much
JakeSaba chapter 13 . 12/26/2020
I like your writing, but i can't see lily the way you portray it. She is so childish all the time, very annoying. They fight so hard and so much that reading becomes tiring and annoying. I don't know if I will be able to finish reading, with fights between them all the time it makes reading heavy and boring.
Snaps chapter 42 . 10/21/2020
When I read Reginald cattermole I just wanted to cry for TLAT. And it’s so sweet that in this scene James is caring for Reg just like in the other fic
Snaps chapter 32 . 10/21/2020
Cmontress29 chapter 1 . 10/17/2020
Okay so much character detailI love it! I’m not sure if all your chapters will be this length but if so, wow I’m totally in for the trilogy!
abhinavvemuri123 chapter 32 . 10/8/2020
Lily's a bitch. Nothing about Rodolphus torturing him, but she wants him to be the better person and run away like a coward
shaies7 chapter 51 . 10/6/2020
i HATE your version on james.! and james is one of my top tree characters so it says something! how could you twist this amazing characters so ugly. all that loyality all that honor that makes every rowling character so likeble JUST VANISHED through ur story. SHAME
Jemma chapter 51 . 9/22/2020
i used to read lots of marauder fic 5 years ago and this was always one of my favorite and i’m back in a hp phase now and decided to reread this and oh my god i am so glad i did! i love your writing so much and this story is so wonderful and you capture james and lily’s dynamic as well as the marauder dynamic so perfectly and i enjoyed every moment of reading this once more! thank you so much for this incredible series - it has been such a joy to revisit! onto kisses on the balcony 3
Baldric Rhythm chapter 3 . 8/14/2020
Im rereading this story for the first time in a long time. And can I just say, I love your writing style? I read a lot of Jily fanfics and all of them are so different in good ways, but this is the most beautiful difference I've seen so far. I'm so impressed with the length of each part, the effort you put into each chapter, and I am so excited to read the rest of it for the second time
Raeger chapter 18 . 8/5/2020
The story's interesting enough, but if I'm being abstract, the plot can be summarised as a couple of love-drama with a light sprinkling of dark forces driving the tension.

The drama and compelling characters are solid enough foundations for a story focused on the relations between the characters, but every main course needs some great sides to complement the highlight of the meal. As just one example, in the series 'James Potter Chronicles', the characters become intimately involved in the brewing war whilst still at Hogwarts, with inter-house tensions serving as a microcosm of the broader conflict. The author uses this to explore the James-Lily-Snape dynamic in their different responses to the danger faced by those who would stand against Voldemort, and also Sirius' conflicted relationship with his family, particularly Regulus.

Anyway, it's been more than a decade and I haven't yet read your more recent writings, but just thought it might be useful to say that this story has a good foundation to build around to turn a fic from 'interesting enough' to 'great' with a bit more fleshing out around the main character dramas.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/4/2020
James didn't need tosay anything if he had any self-respect
The cat with blue eyes chapter 51 . 7/17/2020
that was an amazing story! I love the way you write the marauders and their interaction. you are also really great with people's feelings. I enjoyed reading this story and I will now continue with the sequels ! thank you for sharing this great work
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2020
i m qlreqdy in luv wid dis book
SunriseEnhanced chapter 44 . 4/25/2020
ugh the disclaimers are back
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