Reviews for Tears on the Balcony
Conflicted chapter 42 . 1/26
I love your writing style, but God is it hard fo read. Lily is a bitch, and I try so hard to like her but it's just so hard to do. And at the same time I can't stop reading your damn story. I feel like I've gotten Stockholm syndrome and I'm just in too deep to quit on the story, because it really frustrates me how drawn out the story is and how inconceivably stupid and annoying the characters are all the time, and yet I still find myself coming back to keep reading. You're a special, twisted kind of evil. I love it. And hate it. You make me bipolar.
Guest chapter 51 . 1/7
Pretty good, went on a bit though
Guest chapter 51 . 12/25/2014
I loved your fanfic. I got really into the lives of your characters and i'll start reading the sequel asap :-) thank you for uploading and sharing, keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 27 . 12/23/2014
I really love this story. I only have one issue and that is that I think all your names are too American. I know that you are American but I feel as though if James had any siblings then they would be called things like Edward, William, George or Arthur or for girls Elizabeth, Anne, Mary or Emily- more traditional British names. Also in the UK the name Riley is predominantly used for males, I've never even heard of a female Riley in this country. Despite this I still really like your writing style and story xxx
snowflakeswift chapter 18 . 11/18/2014
snowflakeswift chapter 17 . 11/18/2014
oh my god. I love Kay. Kay has such an undercurrent of strong.
snowflakeswift chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
I like how James and Lily haven't actually interacted THAT much yet. I mean, the kiss, but yeah that doesn't really count. You've had time to work on their backstories and to let us get to know them, and that's what I'm really enjoying about this story. I mean, I want them to get together SOMETIME, but I LOVE how they aren't really doing much. Yet.
snowflakeswift chapter 2 . 11/15/2014
What DOES cheese say when it gets its picture taken?

Aside from that, I love this story so far! It's very...hmm...sassy.
Kimmily chapter 51 . 10/25/2014
Awww, the end. Sad, i would have loved to see the Sirius and Riley secret revieled. All in all, I loved your story. It was fun to read although it did have a few - maybe more than a few - sad parts; I enjoyed reading it emensly. The whole story had a lot of content, and I am glade the chapters were so long, but here and there it did seem a bit wordy and to be honest I did skip a few paragraphs here and there.
None the less, thank you for writing and sharing.
Kimmily chapter 49 . 10/25/2014
OOOOh MY GOOOOOOOD he chose her ;) how unexpected, I'm so happy ;) joking, but still it's awesome that they finaly made the first real step ;)
Kimmily chapter 47 . 10/24/2014
Go Sirius, I really love him right now he's the best ;)
Kimmily chapter 45 . 10/24/2014
Midnight-kisses ;) how exciting.
Kimmily chapter 44 . 10/24/2014
this chapter was so sad. But of course I am glade Sirius knows about Lily's affection for a certain head boy. This way he can interfier, because, contrairy to everyone'S believes, i think he is rather capable of doing something right.
Kimmily chapter 43 . 10/20/2014
Well isn't Kristina just a whiny female dog ;) It really was pretty obviouse that James would slip right? I mean it's hard to keep something like that in, when you are in a heated arrgument. Let'S see what happens since it's never over ;)
Kimmily chapter 42 . 10/19/2014
Guess that could have gone better ;) Glade they are confronting eachother, though James really was picking a fight this time...
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