|Reviews for Tears on the Balcony|
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/9
OMG NO NO OMG WHY MUST U DO THIS THANK GODS THIS IS FINISHED
| Guest chapter 46 . 11/5
I realize this is an older story? Probably written back in the "Hey Day", and that a lot of people look for angst. That being said...here is absolutely no reason why these 2 people should end up together. This story is ridiculous.
James is evidently really awesome to his girlfriend. And has been really horrible constantly to lily for 7 years. And yet...the author tries to sell you James and Lily. I seriously hope teens and younger don't find this and look to it as an acceptable example of how people should be treated.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/1
Omg Lily is literally me. My "friends" are so disrespectful. Geez the similarity is, quite frankly extremely unnerving.
| jlb chapter 11 . 11/1
This is the first fan fic I've ever read and I'm really enjoying this! I think you've been very true to the characters and It makes me laugh alot. :)
| Guest chapter 27 . 9/29
I can't even keep up with why Lily is mad with James all the time. This is literally pointless, like going around in circles.
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/28
Getting really tired of this long, pointless conversation. It's not funny and no one really cares about Riley and Kay. Also the Americanisms are annoying. I've really enjoyed the Lily and James stuff you've written but there's hardly any of it there. If you had come up with a more well thought out subplot rather than essentially Riley and Sirius as another couple I may be more interested. You need to mix up dialogue and description. Quite disappointed tbh.
| Guest chapter 38 . 9/10
Man, I don't know if I can get myself to read the rest of this. The pointless conversations go on and on forever and ever and contribute nothing to the plot or character development. I really don't care where the characters end up because at this point I really hate all of them, especially the main characters. It's really repetitive too which makes it frustrating to read, which would probably be fine if it were about half as long.
| Darknight179 chapter 1 . 8/30
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/30
i don't think lily was being stupid i don't think you are commenting enough on how jealous kristina is being towards jame and lily when lily is nice to jaes she gets jealous
| Mad Person chapter 47 . 8/11
LILY'S FAULT? HOW IN THE NAME OF BLOODY MERLIN IS IT LILY'S FAULT? IT'S JAMES'! HE. HAS. A. GIRLFRIEND. WOULD YOU DATE HIM IN THAT SITUATION?
| Mad Person chapter 43 . 8/10
FUCK KIRISTINA! SHE CAN GO TO HELL OR PURGATORY!
| Guest chapter 42 . 8/8
I think that Lily is being a very big bitch... She's frustrating and annoying.
| Mad Person chapter 38 . 8/8
DON'T USE THE "LIKE A GIRL" INSULT. IT'S RUDE AND OFFENSIVE TO GIRLS, BITCH
| Mad Person chapter 33 . 8/7
| Mad Person chapter 30 . 8/6
I HATE JAMES. HE CAN ALSO GO TO HELL. BUT I DON'T BITCH ABOUT THE THINGS I DON'T GIVE A FUCKING BLOODY DAMN ABOUT