Reviews for Tears on the Balcony
Guest chapter 20 . 7/21
Riley's a bitch. She's absolutely awful.
TheMalu chapter 51 . 7/10
I'm a bit late to get to this, but it was so damn worth it! very well written and I'm not pausing to get on with the sequel! awesome!
Guest chapter 32 . 7/1
Now this is getting on my nerves. They should seriously learn to control their mouths. Why are they keep firing up, insult each other to the extreme, say some stupid things that cant be recovered, regret, apologize, and repeat this whole process again and again? I mean your story is good really, i love how you lead it with all these Gryffindors bondings, but the way Lily and James go through this endless circle... its frustrating. Cant they just be bloody truthful for just one bloody minute?
Nexis121 chapter 51 . 6/29
your story was one hell of a ride. Difficult to read, but worth it in the end. Everything was perfectly built up, despite the fact that the building up was painful. Nice story! On to the sequel
fuck me bitches chapter 18 . 6/16
Bro this is the awesomely thing since pizza I love it I love it so much I am crying by the way if you want this book published just answer back and I will tell you my phone no James is such a dick Riley is behaving like a tit Fuck me Sirius black Peter I hate Remus I love lily is just a little too closed up Kay's fine kristina is the biggest bitch slit in the entire fucking universe
WeasleyCousin chapter 6 . 5/19
I read A Different Kind of Love Story and Blame recently and really, truly loved them both. The Balcony series has been on my "to read" list for a long time. I was really excited to dig into a nice long series. But, I started Tears on the Balcony the other night and I'm having the hardest time getting into it. I have to agree with some of the other reviews on here... it's a bit long-winded and I'm not finding any of the characters particularly likeable or relatable. I realize a story would be boring if there was no conflict at all, but I'm just not invested in what happens to any of them. You have a ton of good reviews, so I'm going to try to stick it out a little longer to see if the plot starts moving along, but I might have to give this one up.
Shadowslayer5 chapter 51 . 2/26
This was an amazing story
AsylumEscapee368 chapter 51 . 2/8
You don't do this to people! You got me staying up all night crying and I have a test tomorrow!
hogwarts' lily chapter 18 . 2/7
This is more than 10 years old, but then again HP is timeless
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5
Oh I LOVE this! And it's freeking 51 chapters!
DemonicLilith.2002 chapter 44 . 2/1
I really love it...tomorrow is my maths exam nd I can't stop reading this ...but plzzz sm1 any1 just tell me in which chap james and lily r going to be together?
L chapter 9 . 1/27
Your writing is decent, if a bit long winded. I tried my best to give you a chance. I'd been looking for a long L/J fic and you had three novel-length ones. I just cannot continue. The characterizations are awful. Lily is a bitch. She and James are awful. Riley is awful. In fact, she's one of the main reasons I can't continue. She is a blatant Mary Sue. I skipped over her lines. The fights are annoying and repetitive. I'm sorry. Like I said, you're a decent writer, but I have to pass on this.
sapphiregirl1020 chapter 51 . 1/23
Aw... This was just so perfect! I never expected to be on such an emotional rollercoaster ride when I clicked on this. Truly an amazing piece of work xx
boopboop chapter 8 . 10/27/2016
have you tried publishing this as a book? I want this published without one word changed, i love it so muchhh
boop chapter 2 . 10/26/2016
i love thiiisssss
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