|Reviews for Tears on the Balcony|
| Guest chapter 51 . 4/8
I love this book. Can not wait to read the sequel. This is the most intresting Lily, James and the marouders book I have ever read. You really have a talent. Do not waste it. Thank you for showing me their relationship in your perspective because it is a good one. Keep on going. Thank you. You are the best
| Kim Richards chapter 49 . 4/8
Yes! Finally. After 49 chapters. Now the fun really begins. Thanks ByeByeBirdie this is so far the best James and Lily fanfic I have ever read
| Kim Richards chapter 42 . 4/6
What the... WHAT? I did not see that punch coming. Thanks for making my day
| Kim Richards chapter 41 . 4/6
I had always wanted Sirius to be the first one to know about Lily's past and now he is. Thank you ByeByeBirdie for making that dream come true.
| Kim Richards chapter 33 . 4/5
You do not know how long I have been waiting for Sirius and Riley to kiss. Yeeesss!
| Kim Richards chapter 32 . 4/5
Yes! Yes! You do not know how widely I am smiling to my self right now. Finally! Yeeess! Just do not make someone spoil the moment. Most definately, Pleease, please do not make Kristina appear from nowhere. Thank you.
| Kim Richards chapter 27 . 4/5
When is Lily ever going to talk about her family? I need to know. And what about the Riley and Sirius thing. And is Kay going to end up with Remus? I am just curious.
| raj chapter 47 . 3/15
okay.. this whole lance and kay, reily and family and reily and grams absolute rubbish fillers...
your way of writing gets boring after a few chapters, same shit all over.. lily being bitch all the time and with her stick up the arse attitude, james being messy and apologizing after each and every shitty fight.
The cliffies that you speak about are no cliffies.. its just absolute rubbish.. to think you came up with a sequel(save me!) god knows i wasted enough reading this shit.. just tell me you didnt publish anything in real world, so that i can thank god for saving us from more bullshit..
| lims chapter 32 . 3/12
freaking bloody hell, that part of the nobody and stuff made me CRY
| Grace chapter 30 . 1/6
Not gonna lie. I'm getting tired of Lily's attitude; she thinks she's super entitled to yell at Potter whenever she wants. I get that she's a Muggleborn and has to work 10 times harder to get what she wants but can she take his feelings into account for once? Godammit.
| Grace chapter 22 . 1/6
Riley is such a bitch. No disrespect, I get that she's angry and feeling betrayed, but godammit if she isn't such a bitch.
| Anon chapter 51 . 1/1
In retrospect, I was really harsh in my previous review. Just ignore it. I'm having a bad day.
Your writing is great, and obviously people have enjoyed your fic - I guess it just wasn't exactly what I was personally looking for. Nothing against you.
| Anon chapter 51 . 1/1
I didn't enjoy this fic. And I hate when people only put Lily/James together right at the end, especially when we have to deal with annoyance and significant third parties for most of it. I scrolled past all the Riley crap and whatever else wasn't related to LJ. I know you said you thought it added to the story - I just thought it added nothing to the story and was frankly quite self indulgent of you.
| LuvDramione chapter 42 . 12/28/2017
Heh. Nice ending. Siriusly.
| LuvDramione chapter 34 . 12/27/2017
I love your story. I truly do. But the only weird thing is the way you end the chapters and then call them cliffhangers. No offence. I'm almost always satisfied with how the chapters end and that shouldn't happen if they're cliffhangers, right? For example, for this chapter to end as a cliffhanger you could've ended it at..."Riley?" he muttered under his breath in shock, not even realising he had uttered her first name...
When Riley admitted that it could be enough I felt happy. I can stop reading for today and then carry on tomorrow without having my heart squeezed out of curiosity or heart break. I'm not going to, of course (Your plot is way too amazing for me to stop except when my mum starts getting so annoyed that she threatens me to break the lappy).
I'm just saying that the endings don't exactly feel like cliffhangers.
Also, I LOVE YOU. I LOVE THIS STORY. MUUWWAAAHHH :D :D :D