Reviews for Nightmare’s Made Flesh
Kikuriki chapter 2 . 10/10/2015
Quick correction, Spear threads are for males only. Distaff threads are for females only. The author never stated the name of male to female threads aside from 'Thread'
Mohamed chapter 19 . 4/7/2011
Your book is grate u should make the chapers longer
xyz chapter 16 . 4/18/2009
We were getting *now where.* -nowhere

Good, now lets go over* are plan for once were there*.” -the plan for when we get there ?

It offends me that she as not shown up for the first one“ -has

I am not going away and your going to listen me *weather* you like it or not, kid.” -whether
xyz chapter 15 . 4/18/2009
Maybe she is still in *their* he thought. -there

*Jerrid *after a careful and very through search of the area, he was still lost and unsure of which way she had gone. - not necessary
xyz chapter 14 . 4/18/2009
“Divear was born here *is* Kaeleer. -in

I am stronger *then* you. -than

Divear noticed that *was* something was wrong - not needed

“She as a normal family. -has
xyz chapter 13 . 4/18/2009
“He is *are* brother, shouldn’t we be more nicer to him. Like help him.” -our

Jerrid won’t be there for a *long either way*. -long *time* either

"Oh, you mean the people that *Jerrid* met.” Selari commented. - Divear ?
xyz chapter 9 . 4/18/2009
Divear could tell that she was laughing at *her*. -him

The purchase *caused* her a lot, but Selari didn’t care. - cost?
xyz chapter 6 . 4/18/2009
A lot older *then* you -than

So Selari told her *tell* - tale
xyz chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
ut someday he would find out how she knew stuff that no child would *no*,

know
storylistener chapter 24 . 12/6/2006
This was one of the most well written and engaging fanfic's I have ever read! I hope you are already working on the sequel as I can't wait to read it! Wonderful Job!
fvwibv8y3474btg chapter 24 . 7/28/2006
That was fun, though I did get confused cause I read to fast, oh well. The ending seemed a bit rushed to me, but that's the only thing I felt bad about, otehr than that... HOORAH!
kiki chapter 24 . 6/21/2006
wow. i love this story! you must must must must make a sequel. btw what happened to divear? he just kinda disapeared *tear*
Artemis Bloodshadow chapter 24 . 6/15/2006
*chants* Sequal. Sequal, sequal, sequal.

This story was wonderful, GreenWarrior! I'll look forward to the sequal!
Nova of Sanity chapter 24 . 6/13/2006
Hi another review for my favorite writer (at least one of them). I like the ending acctually and yes how it ended does put uop the possibility of a sequal. If I were you I'd make a sequal out of this one, but what about the title?
Surreal SaDiablo chapter 24 . 6/9/2006
i really think you need to do a sequel.

i think that your story is awesome and i wish that other authors updated as fast as you do!
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