|Reviews for Nightmare’s Made Flesh|
| Mohamed chapter 19 . 4/7/2011
Your book is grate u should make the chapers longer
| xyz chapter 16 . 4/18/2009
We were getting *now where.* -nowhere
Good, now lets go over* are plan for once were there*.” -the plan for when we get there ?
It offends me that she as not shown up for the first one“ -has
I am not going away and your going to listen me *weather* you like it or not, kid.” -whether
| xyz chapter 15 . 4/18/2009
Maybe she is still in *their* he thought. -there
*Jerrid *after a careful and very through search of the area, he was still lost and unsure of which way she had gone. - not necessary
| xyz chapter 14 . 4/18/2009
“Divear was born here *is* Kaeleer. -in
I am stronger *then* you. -than
Divear noticed that *was* something was wrong - not needed
“She as a normal family. -has
| xyz chapter 13 . 4/18/2009
“He is *are* brother, shouldn’t we be more nicer to him. Like help him.” -our
Jerrid won’t be there for a *long either way*. -long *time* either
"Oh, you mean the people that *Jerrid* met.” Selari commented. - Divear ?
| xyz chapter 9 . 4/18/2009
Divear could tell that she was laughing at *her*. -him
The purchase *caused* her a lot, but Selari didn’t care. - cost?
| xyz chapter 6 . 4/18/2009
A lot older *then* you -than
So Selari told her *tell* - tale
| xyz chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
ut someday he would find out how she knew stuff that no child would *no*,
| storylistener chapter 24 . 12/6/2006
This was one of the most well written and engaging fanfic's I have ever read! I hope you are already working on the sequel as I can't wait to read it! Wonderful Job!
| fvwibv8y3474btg chapter 24 . 7/28/2006
That was fun, though I did get confused cause I read to fast, oh well. The ending seemed a bit rushed to me, but that's the only thing I felt bad about, otehr than that... HOORAH!
| kiki chapter 24 . 6/21/2006
wow. i love this story! you must must must must make a sequel. btw what happened to divear? he just kinda disapeared *tear*
| Artemis Bloodshadow chapter 24 . 6/15/2006
*chants* Sequal. Sequal, sequal, sequal.
This story was wonderful, GreenWarrior! I'll look forward to the sequal!
| Nova of Sanity chapter 24 . 6/13/2006
Hi another review for my favorite writer (at least one of them). I like the ending acctually and yes how it ended does put uop the possibility of a sequal. If I were you I'd make a sequal out of this one, but what about the title?
| Surreal SaDiablo chapter 24 . 6/9/2006
i really think you need to do a sequel.
i think that your story is awesome and i wish that other authors updated as fast as you do!
| yoyo person chapter 24 . 6/9/2006
OMG chelle you have done the one thing that i have not been able to do witha fic! you finished it! i could never finish it! heck i havent updated in forever, maybe thats the problem that and i have no real plot... hmm well i shall await the sequel, and there better be a sequel! *shakes fist*