|Reviews for The Magnificent|
| Lady Aramis chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
That was a beautifully written story-it made me cry.
| faults chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
oh that's awful, but so damn perfect.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Perfectu. So much Feliks in Hege!
| the starks of new york chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
but i loved this story.
but Peter... :(
| HitTheRoad chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
that was devastating. beautiful, but devastating.
| Temporarily Nameless chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
I have always appreciated the bleaker, more realistic view on those stories we know and love and you have done it well.
If you were trying for a tragedy, you succeeded; I wept.
| Torchbug chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
...I have a feeling you wrote this out of personal experience. I am sorry for your loss.
And Peter...he's so idealistic, so pure, so quick to blame himself, that I can see him not being able to cope. Narinia is like the land in which a fairytake takes place. Not like our world during their time. Susan found a way to live that highlighted the qualities that she was known for as a queen. Edmund saved others like himself, knowing the pain of regret and the joy of redemption. Lucy became the cordial of this world, becoming something entirely otherworldly to keep her sanity. But Peter was still in Narnia, never able to truly leave it behind.
Why be normal, when you were once a king?
| Kimberly T chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I swear, it was like my heart got squeezed while inside my chest as I read this. So beautiful, so true, so sad... I can already tell, this one's going to resonate in my head and haunt me for a long while.
| sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I hardly know what to say to this incredible piece.
I have literally sat here with the review box open for about ten minutes trying to pull my thoughts together enough to write something coherent for you.
All I can say is that this will be a story that will stick with me for a long time. I'm going to think back to it time and time again. I know it.
You wrote this perfectly.
| marble-fire chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
| LalaQuinn chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Fantastically written! Bravo!
| citylights319 chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
| metaphoricheart chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
this is beautiful. it made me cry.
| Queen Edmund Pevensie chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Well that was sad, but beautiful.
| A Hopeful Voice chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Oh, this is so sad! But so well written, too! I think it's very true that Peter had the hardest time adjusting to England after Narnia, and even though this ending is very sad, it's really good! :)