|Reviews for The Magnificent|
| StarlingChild4 chapter 1 . 7/29
This is heartbreaking :'( A gritty look into the real consequences of four children growing up in Narnia and being forced back into the roles of children.
| ChordOverstreetFan chapter 1 . 3/20
Peter is honestly the only one that makes sense with the suicide idea. For all we know, he could have ended up with a family sometime during the Golden Age - and they were gone by the time that he got back to Narnia the first time. Not only that, but what makes him a great king...there are not many places for that in the real world unless you're born into royalty, or marry into it - mostly born...unfortunately, Peter falls into neither category in his world.
| sneeuwleeuw chapter 1 . 3/2
wow i came here for some fun times and that was not fun. not at all.
Seriously thought I love your narnia work it's something of great beauty.
| Lytwig reject chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
Damm that was SAD
| hiothedragon chapter 1 . 1/23/2017
This really should have a warning
| Aviendha Aviendha Aviendha chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
That ending ... that was NOT what I was expecting.
| AfterTheApocalypse chapter 1 . 8/10/2016
Thank you for breaking my heart. It was not what I wanted or needed but... It was magnificently done.
| it'sanolive chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
this is so good
| agent2811 chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
This had me screaming "NO" at the top of my lungs at 2am. Congratulations
| problemhunter chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
That was, in a matter of a few (but certainly concise, nonetheless) words, simply ineffable - too great to be described by words alone; you managed to portray the sheer difficulty of Magnificence fitting in a world where a man with a heart of gold in all aspects can never truly belong. It was beautiful and tragic. Kudos to you.
| WeAreShootingStars chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
Oh. My. Gosh. I simply have no words. This was so beautiful and tragic and I'm sitting here dumbfounded by your words. Everything... everything flowed like poetry. I FELT this story in my veins. I SAW this story playing out before me. I HEARD the passion, confusion, joy or pride in this story's voice. I cried at the final shot. But God! How glad I am that I was so blessed to discover this gorgeous work. Never stop writing!
| Remnant Stars chapter 1 . 2/9/2015
This story hurts. So beautiful but I cried.
| Lady Aramis chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
That was a beautifully written story-it made me cry.
| faults chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
oh that's awful, but so damn perfect.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Perfectu. So much Feliks in Hege!