Reviews for breathing patterns
GiantMutantCoconuts chapter 2 . 10/5/2009
Holy crap, I honestly did not expect that ending. It was amazing. I was shocked. I love the style and how the ending was seperated like that. Wonderful.
toastyoats chapter 2 . 10/19/2008

Super-short, but strangely intriguing and definitely...

I don't know what.

I really liked it, despite my inner distaste for RikuKairi. Whatever, you made this neat.

MordeMe chapter 2 . 11/5/2007
This is so amazing good. Very artistic format, nice build up of anticipation, and absolutely wonderful ending. The rhythm established by the inhale/exhale thing was also really great!
blaahblaah chapter 2 . 7/16/2007
Aw...I feel bad for Sora. _ Great story, though. :)
CrossoverQueen chapter 1 . 6/9/2007

One of my favorite het pairings is Kairiku.

I feel bad for Sora, but at the same time I'm happy for Riku.

Because Riku is like the romantic kicked-puppy of the Destiny Trio.

Interesting format, too.
A Shining Armour chapter 2 . 1/20/2007
Wow, really interestingly laid out. Extremely short, but strong all the same. Nice job.
anon chapter 2 . 10/13/2006
I cracked up like I was on drugs. That was messed up.

Short and sweet. But the Riku part had me rollin. Haha she is so messed up.
foxy crimefighta chapter 2 . 10/10/2006



that was .. truly unique, and oh-so beautiful, lovely.
twilighttries chapter 2 . 9/5/2006
Oh my god. That's horrible. I love it!
Starr Bryte chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
Oh... Ouch... And we never really know which way it goes... It could all end one of three ways.

"Sora, I love you."

"Sora, I love Riku."


"Sora, I love the both of you."

Since I am a huge Trinity fan I'm gonna lean towards the third one... Cool..
kingdomfantasyanime453 chapter 2 . 8/12/2006
are you gonna continue
Kousuke chapter 2 . 7/22/2006
that was pretty interesting.
waterblossom chapter 2 . 5/31/2006
that was so awesome.
freakenout chapter 2 . 4/16/2006
no! SAORAXRIKU! lol. i lik it. original. P.
My Chemical Romance Dude chapter 2 . 4/3/2006
i love how you ended it in the second chap. awesom.
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