Reviews for Breaking the Habit
Blanco Pagina chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
what are you TALKING about, you dont write very many jameslily oneshots? you have like fifty...and they are all AWESOME, by the way. really. like, you dont even know, man.

go lily and her breaking of the habit! woot! that reminds me of the linkin park-who, btw, are the best band EVER-song. i love it!

bub'les
Miss DnG chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
haha, yay! Well written btw :)
witches with awesomeness chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
cute!
Terra ace chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
It's pretty sweet. Nothing like a dose of cold reality to wake Lily up.

Nice work!
CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
oh this was cute and so sweet and corny and yet perfect!
Kassie chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
um er sorry but I didn't like it. But others did so I guess u cant please evryone. I just didn't like Lily or James' characterization
Andie chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
My favorite lines?

“Ask me or I’ll hex you.”

“Just say no and get it over with.”

“Ask me properly and you’ll get your proper answer,” I said, my hand inching toward my wand in my back pocket.

So CUTE
Ivory Cloud chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
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god, lily is so lucky to have someone like james and then she just keeps saying "no".

wah. poor james.

but meh happy that it had a good ending. that was cute.

keep writing, chika! (i know it's spelled chica... but chika just looks so much cooler)

alyssa
ShIvErInG sMiLe chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Lol. That was short and sweet. really nice
Seer of Spots chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Woot! I cheer with that inner angel! Yay!

...

*cough*

Uh... Yeah... you could say I liked it...

*BIG GRIN*
Airealataiel chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
This was rather cute. On the contrary to your opinion, I thought this was done quite well. I did so enjoy it, and would like to read more stories like it.

My advice would be to go deeper on Lily's inner turmoil. Try to bring that out even further.

Otherwise, great job. :)
Elizabeth Theresa chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Hey, why exactly don't you think this is good. I must disagree, I loved it!
LilJester chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
this was very good. Great job!
illusion100 chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
this is a great fic! write more of these will u?
VampireApple chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Ha! This was funny. I liked it.
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