Scene cut due to mature content?!

Uhh...you might want to know that, after secondary school, students apply for College first for two years (17-18), before going to University. I wasn't sure about whether or not Snape and Harry were talking about what would happen immediately after secondary school (meaning they should have been talking about applying or College, not Uni) or if they were talking about whether or not Harry would be going to Uni in a few years after first leaving Secondary School and going to College.

I wasn't entirely sure which it was, but considering that, at the age of 14/15 College would be an English students primary concern (and if this is set in the same period as the books, kids were still able to leave school at 16 instead of going to College right after year 11 back then) I'm gonna assume you meant College when you wrote Uni. You've gotten everything else pretty much spot-on though.

I've been putting this off long enough, it's now Chapter 25, it's the weekend and I have no more reasons to put this off. This is an AMAZING story, and you are a very creative writer! I work as a high school teacher (i'm only 27 mind you so my students are about my age) and I used to love going to work. The last week and a half I wake up every morning, open my computer while I'm getting ready for the day and read your story. I HATE going to work because it means a) that I can't read your story because I have to go to work. B) That I can't read it work and C) because when I come home I'm bogged down with grading papers so I can't get BACK to the story right away! So instead i'm up until 11-12 at night reading the story.

I was wondering if you still had the part you cut out of this chapter as I'm complete obsessed with how this relationship has played out. If you do, would you mind emailing me this chapter in its entirety? .

Thank you so much! Please keep writing.

As odd as it sounds, this story made me cry. A lot. Going through Harry's misadventures \hurt/, and seeing that something was wrong with him when Draco and Severus didn't had me, I'm ashamed to admit, close to sobbing at one point. I don't know what it is about the way you've written this story that reminds me of my own struggles to be seen and to stop my own pain from being noticed, but the Harry you've created is beautiful, and relate-able, and I adore him. Not to mention you're portrayal of Harry and Draco's relationship. It was raw, it was awkward, and it was awe inspiring. Thank you.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. I can't believe I've only found this story now. I even found the deleted portion too as well (waggles eyebrows) haha. I love your plot and character development and how well you fit many canon aspects while still keeping it AU. Even with your OCs and Ron as a friend of Draco's (I was surprised at this choice) I usually HATE stories with any OC and any with Ron in a good portion of it but this kept it every exciting. Though I do think that a plot twist at Harry's accident would have been interesting. For example, what if Harry ended up having amnesia where he remembers nothing of the Malfoys or Snape and that the Dursleys were called to pick him up and he went back to his old school? Haha random thoughts but I thought that would have been a good plot lengthener or even an alternate ending.

Harry is so dumb oh my fucking god! Arggggggggg

They really have communication problems. So much angst with Harry. Arg. I hate the fact that this story is good and I force myself to finish it.

Why are we callin Harry and Draco's pairing 'drarry'? We should call it 'DENIAL'. I just tired of those stupid boys who don't understand their feelings.

No, this story is bloody brilliant! You don't even know happy I was. And who you included Voldemort and the magic stuff, brilliant!

I've always avoided non-magic stories before, but this one held me from the first chapter. Thank you for writing it.

Duuuude. I loved this story so much! It was wonderfully beautiful. I know you don't write stories anymore. But this one is a real gem. One of the best Harry Potter fics i've ever read. If you'll still write, keep up the damn good work. XD

Interesting! Draco is charming, and the Dursley's moving in sequence reminded me of Beetlejuice (the Deetz's), so I found it more amusing than I think it was meant to be from Draco's POV.

Grrr..Why did you have to end it?! I want them to finish school, Harry to become a botanist, move to the Netherlands, get married, and write a series of books about a young boy who lived twice!

Ok, this was brilliant, I really enjoyed it. I do have one complaint: the distinct lack of Sirius and Remus, and that Narcissa and Severus never got together. Ok, that was 2. Allow me to explain the second one. You never really made it sound like they were going to, or even should, but when Harry is yelling at Snape saying how he can't get a girl (I'm pretty sure he wa in the hospital) it almost seemed like he was hinting that there was something between Snape and Narcissa. It could just be my imagination. Either way, I enjoyed it. I do wish there was a scene in which Draco an Harry came out though. Perhaps some other time :)

You left me feeling awful here with all that scene cut, is there any way I can read it, please? **