Reviews for Catch 22
MagykjayEmmax chapter 5 . 7/29/2012
One word: AWESOME!
Jozern chapter 5 . 6/9/2012
Awesome.
nomad chapter 2 . 5/29/2012
i loved the 22nd best "Naruto does not want to have to deal with an angry pornographer who can kill people with hair."
ToAruKagakuNoPersona chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
That's wrong. The Shodaime and Nidaime Hokages were named Hashirama Senju and Mitorama Senju, respectively. Everything else is correct.
random chapter 5 . 3/26/2012
The last one is just...

Creepy. o.o

It's a good death, though what comes before it is just terrifying and breathtakingly beautiful at the same.

Lyrics that popped into my head upon reading 22:

My heart clenches, and I'm seeing red

I'm fairly sure I'm already dead

So far gone from redemption

One thing left to mention

Before I fall

Goodbye, goodbye to you all

His death was really chilling. He really reminds me of Zabuza in that case...O.o
random chapter 4 . 3/26/2012
Now, why would Sasuke put a Chidori through Kimimaro's face? *evilgrin*

Because it's what I live for...that is just sickening.

Moegi died... :(

"Leaving so soon?"
random chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
I really liked 22and 23, because they depicted Sasuke really well. Stupid girl and dumbass fit his resentment and fondness for them remarkably well, like he's trying to convince himself they weren't worth it, and 23 has him finally understanding, but he feels like he can never go back again, so he doesn't.
Rhianona chapter 5 . 2/23/2012
Very enjoyable. I like the different scenarios and your take on the various characters. Very fun to read, especially for a new fan of Naruto.
dragonstrike7 chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
Konohamaru v Hanabi?

You had me giggling.

Thank you.
DisMinded chapter 5 . 12/7/2011
Okay, so I'm like 5 years late to the party on this one. I usually don't write in on stories unless they're ongoing, but this one was so good that I had to... Well, write in an and tell you it was awesome. Which I just did... So yea...

Bye!

On a more serious note, I like the way you formatted this and your choices for... I guess you'd call them scenes? Facts? Whatever. You throw out all these disparate scenes, and you give the reader just enough to go on that he can connect the dots himself and imagine an overarching plot. Along the way, you breath life into the various characters, making them more likable and interesting and real than even canon does. So congrats on a very good story.
babythor chapter 5 . 11/30/2011
This was excellent. The time and creativity spent on each of the character's backgrounds, triumphs, and failures, is phenomenal. However, I feel that Sakura was ripped off the attention every other main/side/filler character received. Otherwise, I've quite enjoyed this and all the work you put into it.
BoutsofInsanity42 chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
Possibly the most beautiful story I have ever written. I wish these would actually be written as AUs. Like Kakashi's "betrayal". Amazing
catdammerj chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Don't know if I'm the only one, but that line in 19 about all of Sasuke's wrinkles being from smiling actually made me really emotional... But great job. Everything seemed liked it could be canon, and explored things I never would have though about.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 5 . 9/1/2011
My ghost is writing this, I died laughing on number five of chapter five. But anyway, was a fun read.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Lmao. Loved number 22'the most
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