Reviews for His Eyes
mouse1592 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
That was great! Maybe you could have mentioned mush but I really like it!
AdrenalineRush16 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Oh, that was so sweet! Don't we all just adore Mush's eyes? :D My only critique is that you should probably specify that she's talking about a guy. We know it's Mush b/c of the summary, but if I didn't know better, I wouldn't thought she was just rambling about chocolate. Although that could just be me, because I'm not very good with deep stuff. ;) Just a suggestion, take or leave!

Great job!

Rustie73 chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Deliciously clever!
j.m.hxc. xo420 chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Aw! Again with the cutenes! Great job! The poem was so good!