Reviews for Silence
mar-isu chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
WOW! You managed in four paragraphs to let me know exactly how Firebird feels and thinks. Great!

Mar'isu
Jaina Kenobi chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
Wow-you captured Firebird's character perfectly! Good work, I'm impressed!
Misti Wolan chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
It's cute. ) It would benefit from more development, I think.

I also think that the first line is harmed by its expansion. In my openion, it would do better to make the first part its own sentence, leaving the other two as a compound sentence (deleting the "and" before "her fingers").

Keep writing!

-Misti
phantasmagorienne chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Must not fangirl Brennen...must not fangirl Brennen...

Right. *coughs* No, really: this was /gorgeous/. I love drabbles. "There is no music for these imprisoned days" is really lovely and fitting; and Firebird missing Brennen because "she has never heard him laugh, and she thinks she would like to" is /perfect/. You're making all my dormant fangirl tendancies to come out again, which is either really bad or really good (I guess it means you've got Brenn down pat).
MidenianScholar chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
*swoon* I want Brennen to laugh for me!

Corey's cute... someday someone should right a fanfic about Firebird's relationship with him or something.

Very good. Defidently like.