Reviews for Belief
ForestGuardian311 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
Beautifully written, and a good dose of brotherly love on Peter's part. :)

Well done.
mkeeg91 chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
welcome home...

I was sadden that Susan didn't make it with them at the end of canon.

thank you for changing that
Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
That was beautiful. It gave me peace on the matter of Susan's fate. Very lovely indeed.
DS chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
wow!
Aisbored chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Lovely piece :) I really hope this eventually happens!
MissBlueSunglasses chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Aww:( This was so bittersweet. Please write another one:)
JayneParker chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Wow. Great job. You went and made me cry.
JP
O.o yaoi fangirl O.o chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
*GASP* Aslan had Susan killed! No offense or anything, but that's basically what's implied because when everyone else died they went to Real Narnia.
MCH chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Nice ending to Susan story like how you showed that Susan while she couldn't think about narnia was still the gentle queen when helping other in England.
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
So interesting. Thank you for giving Susan a character that works, for explaining her behavior with a motivation that may still be true.

I find it hard to believe that Aslan would change his mind like that...

... but I loved reading about Susan coming home.

Sapphireswimming
Kate chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
I would like to point out that The Last Battle never says Susan will not make it to the New Narnia. In fact the repeated line Once a King or Queen of Narnia, always a King or Queen of Narnia, implies that one day Susan will make it there, only that her journey will be far more difficult than the one her family faced. It is also necessary to note that it was Susan who deliberately rejected Narnia. Aslan was not keeping her out, Susan was not trying to get in.
addy4me chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
That was beautiful. I was close to tears in the middle, you expressed Susan's change perfectly through the eyes of a brother. I hate how she changed, as she was always my favorite character.
lifechiaroscuro chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Love. it.
ImpossibleThings chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Swear to God I almost cried. I'm a little too emotional right now I think...but seriously this was perfect.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
I love how Peter defends Susan. I agree with what snowstargirl's review. It says everything perfectly, and I couldn't write it better. I would also like to think that one day she returns to Narnia. "Once a king or queen of Narnia, alwasy a king or qween of Narnia."
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