Beatiful! You're such an amazing auther.

so beautiful, i thought i'd cry...and the vegeta one was just as cute.

I liked the Vegeta one, and I like this.

You say you find it hard to get Goku in character, but I think you did it quite well. Come to think of it, he does notice everything...

Vegeta's reaction was interesting too. Not quite what I expected, but it worked. :)

- Hippy

I haven't reviewed this yet?

You already know I think this is awesome, Macabre-san... but it bears saying again here.

I love the way you get into Goku's head, and what he says about noticing things... it's true. People say he's stupid, but he's not - he notices EVERYTHING, and he understands a lot more than people assume.

And I love Vegeta's reaction to Goku's confession. It's just perfect.

what the heck was that? sorry but i found it dumb