Reviews for Smoke
Sakurascorpion19 chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Short, yet deep...good!
Aseret Kitsune chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Wow. This is really interesting. Yeah, it makes sense before the commentary. Great job!
KakyoTheStickInTheMud chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Short and sweet. Good stuff. (And yes, I figured it out before the commentary.)
ciacconne chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
Whoa.. o.o that was intense to me.