Wow. That ending surprised me. I thought that somehow the present and the past Maries and Logans would merge. Now Marie's going to have to be even more doubtful about her relationship with Logan. She's going to have to wonder if he's just comparing her young self to her older self. That's kind of a mind screw, poor girl.

That said, this was a great story. I read almost the whole thing today. I couldn't stop!

Oh Logan. How are you supposed to protect Marie if you're in another time or dimension or something? Great succession of chapters. I'm going to give myself another 20 minutes and THEN I'll go to sleep. You're writing's just too good to put down. :)

I love Pyro taunting Iceman. I know I'm supposed to be cheering for the good guy but there is a bit of truth to what Pyro said . . . although I think women like a man who can be bad when he wants to be, but is good when it comes right down to it . . like the Wolverine. Now there's a man a girl could like. I hope Logan overheard Pyro's taunting. Maybe it will help him to get a clue. Ya think? Wonderful chapter. I'm going to read one more and then I AM going to bed. That's the problem with finding a really good story. Sleep deprivation usually ensues!

Interesting beginning. I like how you've mapped out the different characters and their current relationships to each other and I'm intrigued to see where this goes. I also like the premise you've set up for the story itself. Very mysterious. You've definitely grabbed my attention. :)

that was ... wow. LOVE! i was freaking out knocked over a soda and squealed in my seat when the battle started and marie was all enpowered and angela was on like buttr on toast! whoop whoop! i LOVE this:) i spent the whole night reading it! i am so glad the only comitments i have tomorrow are in the afternoon because it is 4:10 AM! i stayed up i was hooked! love ... thats all i can say:) using all the characters from the show/comics implimenting things from the movies *gasp* idk if i have ever seen it so well done:) i am so happy with it:) it was like a great book that you dont want to end but you can see the pages left for you to read getting thinner and thinner:) then the end comes and it is a sense of compleation (great ending btw!) but the longing for the story to continue and to know what happens next! wow. You are truly one talanted and amazing writer:) thank you for this story i will definetly be looking into your other works:) man! that was ... wow but so hard to see it end:/ .. LOVE!

Good story. Well written as well.

This storys cool

OMG! That was so good! I had hoped Logan would fall for the past marie but oh well. I loved it!

This was the most amazing story. You have a gift. I hope you continue and I can't wait to read more of your stories!

This story was fantastic! I can't believe that such a story could exist on X-Men fan fiction, but it does and it's as if I'm reading a book done by a professional. You are amazing and your story was an awesome ride at that. Thank you so much for the read! :D

freaking great, you're a genious

wow i never read a fic more then 3 chapters...and this one was a few more lol. wow...wow...wow...not much more can be said...

wonderful story! it confused me a little by jumping back and forth but only because i didn't realize that it did jump back and forth at first if that makes any sense. update soon please! i really enjoyed reading and the character development was very well done!

Sequal please.

nice good job