Reviews for You were saying?
Meli2121 chapter 4 . 5/1/2011
please make a last chapter when you put the part when he sees her alive!111
JayD chapter 4 . 8/25/2007
that was soo cute!
hotwheels chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
really good, u captured the characters really well in ur story. wwell done :P
Nythembra chapter 4 . 8/17/2006
eh, its ok.
Nythembra chapter 3 . 8/17/2006
i can see that you watch comentaries too. i watch them all the time. nice job.
Nythembra chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
oh by gosh! the end of the first chapter is hilarious!
LeoPiper4ever chapter 2 . 4/15/2006
Well I thought that this chapter was rather funny! I really liked the part when Rick goes “And you don’t change a hair on your little head.” Rick said jokingly, making her giggle. I started cracking up when I read that.
Watson-A-Name92 chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Whoops my previous review stands corrected, Ardeth bounced off and Evie ran into the bus, apologies, either way GREAT STORY
Watson-A-Name92 chapter 3 . 2/18/2006
Great, only one thing I noticed that doesn't eally matter, but in the outtakes, Evee gets close enough to the bus to push off, unfortunately, Ardeth is really the one that runs into it...nearly headfirst hehehe
marlee chapter 2 . 12/30/2005
hey this is great so far. I recognize parts from the book that you added in.

love to see more...update
danielle515 chapter 2 . 12/29/2005
great story, i can't wait for the next part..update soon!
Cookie044 chapter 2 . 12/29/2005
really good, keep it going girl.
mara chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Well..well..well... What can I say?.. update! hahaha

It's funny and sexy and mummy! I really loved your deleted scenes, keep going, my friend! :)

Happy New Year's Eve!


Greetings from México!
Cookie044 chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Very interesting and different. I liked it...pls. do another deleted scene.