|Reviews for Pay|
| sychopenguin5 chapter 3 . 5/17/2011
So... I get that Naesala's thought processes are supposed to be, as you said, "incomprehensible," but there are ways to make it a little more comprehensible. Like putting all fantasy sequences in italics? Or just an indicator sentence to show that Naesala is imagining a scene. Or something. Whatever.
Anyway, I'd like to read more of this! Although, it's been like 5 years, so maybe I shouldn't get my hopes up...
Loving Naesala's vanity! And Reyson being kind of a badass. ;D
| ChIbIaNgElChAn12 chapter 2 . 10/12/2009
Hahahaha! This is FUNNY! ... Poor Reyson...
| Syeroix chapter 3 . 9/20/2007
It's a bit confusing when it switches from Naesala's thought to the real story...
But I love the story. I can't stop laughing.
| Syeroix chapter 2 . 9/20/2007
I love your story. If I could take my eye off the screen for a moment I'd be laughing in my pillow.
...I beat Naesala would eat an ice cream sandwhich.
| Syeroix chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
XD. I like your story. Makes me laugh.
| amberesinite chapter 3 . 6/10/2007
I was going through some old papers in my room, and I found one of all my favorite FE pairings that had ReysonNaesala on it. At first I couldn't believe what I was thinking when I decided on that pairing, but I love this fic, and I think it actually IS one of my favorite pairings now XD
| FlamingDoritos chapter 3 . 2/2/2007
Ehehehehe! Ahh, that was GOOD! I LOVE IT! You must update SOON! Please, oh PLEASE, OH PLEASE! I'll...I'll... well, I don't know right this very second, but I'LL DO SOMETHING FOR YOU EVENTUALLY!
| pookie-77 chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
*review was cut off*
I just came my pants.
I usually don't like yaoi ((especially with my favorite character, Naesala love)), but you do it SO well.
PLZ update soon.
It is so hilarious. I, too, would give a thousand pancakes ...
~ Pookie ~
| pookie-77 chapter 3 . 12/2/2006
I just came my pants.
I usually don't like yaoi - especially with my favorite character ((
| Firebird chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
W.T.F is wrong with you!
| Kazoshi chapter 3 . 9/25/2006
Haha...moonwalk...I can imagine
Naesala is quite...how should I say...scary...yes, scary
Keep writing puhlease!
| Vyse Arcadia chapter 3 . 9/2/2006
awsome and so funny! keep up the good work!
| brandy mallory chapter 3 . 8/28/2006
Who? Oh yes, little Ikey’s tactician bed warmer.
i loved that line!
keep it up!
| Jewelled Wolf chapter 2 . 8/16/2006
I do hope you continue this...SOON
| wolfofsummerbreeze chapter 2 . 8/5/2006
I am... very amused