|Reviews for Tootsie's Family Gets a Lot of Bad Lucks|
| TBorNotTB chapter 2 . 4/2/2011
The first chapter would be much better with more details and by being longer. The poem doesn't make sense.
| craziunderurbed999 chapter 2 . 3/18/2011
I didn't like this story at all.
| cutiepie010 chapter 2 . 1/2/2010
i like both of them
| cougrawannabe chapter 2 . 1/29/2009
| coffee.DESU chapter 2 . 12/28/2007
This is really funny,but write longer it's kind of confusing don't you think?
| PirateCrayon chapter 2 . 11/20/2006
| can'thearyou chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
this story is really good u should update soon
| gondalo15 chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
Here's what I thought of this story. I don't get it at all. I don't understand why people think this is funny. When you put "Toostie!", (which, by the way, is Tootsie, as in the candy,) I was thinking, Oh my gosh, this person doesn't understand that you put "Tootsie!" mom called blah blah blah. not, "Toostie!", mom called blah blah blah. You are spelling some words wrong, and I have to say, that I am so confused this might be why I am being so critical. Write your chapters longer too. I think that might help. Nobody likes a chapter three words long.
| Freebird87 chapter 2 . 1/2/2006
| Harrypotterbooksarefun chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
I am so sorry. It was funny. The poem does not make any sense. Update sooner or later.
| raingirl95 chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
It's so funny! but you wrote the story short!