Reviews for the mermaid
CharlieB022 chapter 10 . 11/11/2014
I love this. I absolutely love this. Brilliant, darling. Looking forward to an update
jess chapter 8 . 11/4/2014
I have at least read this story about 4 times now I think I'm just drawn to the way this story is written & also that Kagome is a mermaid & Sesshomaru seems to be falling for both of her personas. I really love how you fit her mermaid heritage into this story it's amazing & very well done I'm not a writer myself but I can tell whenever someone has writtena great story & you have I that you continue this one.
jess chapter 10 . 11/3/2014
Hope 4 more soon!
jess chapter 10 . 10/30/2014
OH i have read this story over 5 times! i really do hope that u add more chapters very soon!
misherukuro chapter 10 . 10/27/2014
Interesting story. ,
Kiya319 chapter 10 . 5/27/2014
Omg this is solo good. Can't wait to see what will happen when sesshoumaru finally finds out that kagome is the mermaid. Lol. That'll be interesting.
JapaneseAnimeChic chapter 10 . 5/1/2014
Please continue! ASAP!
SayonaraKuroi chapter 10 . 4/5/2014
Please continue!
Asanobara chapter 10 . 2/27/2014
Love this story! Please continue!
Nydon chapter 10 . 2/9/2014
I really like this story and I was wondering when you would be putting up another chapter. I hope it is very soon! _
MoaSweden chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
I have read this story many times now and I find it absolutely beautiful! I have no idea 2 why you haven't updated it but I hope you do it soon. Your writing type is amazing(talented is the right word 2 describe you) hugs moa 18 y/o
crystal chapter 10 . 1/5/2014
i love it. if I was you I would make kagome tell sesshomaru who she really is if I was u. if your trying to make him fall in love with both of them and then figure out that there one and the same person. well good luck with the next chapter.;)
Guest chapter 10 . 12/26/2013
come on please don't stop the story its really good and hanabi and sesshomaru didn't become lovers yet or kagome and sesshomaru evens though they are the same person also i like the anime style moment when kagome told them about passing her math class shippou's tail twitching from side to side was cute
Guest chapter 7 . 12/26/2013
wow intense
Guest chapter 6 . 12/26/2013
yo u got it goin on this is the best book i ever read and i've read a lot of fanfictions i love the way u came up wit the idea of her bein a mermaid thats tight and having a kingdom under a lake with a merfather and havin daddy issues killin u should make more books like this with stuff people would least suspect like making up a legendary demon and making her his daughter and her not knowing inuyasha and the group and they end up meeting while she is fighting a demon and she meets sesshomaru at the same time and she starts traveling with them and sesshomaru takes a liking to her or everyone in the fudel time being regular wolves and her being a special wolf with powers that has to fight a bad guy named x and his companions shadow and dark and sesshomaru and inuyasha being the princes of the packs and ahe joins them and they both take a liking to her while she finds a orphan wolf cub and takes it in as her own with a jealous girl in the tribe not to mention her being the most beautiful girl that would be tots awesome
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