|Reviews for First|
| StreetlightsAndCityscapes chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
This oneshot was, as Shikamaru puts it, "a breath of fresh air". I wasn't expecting to like it, considering I ship NejiTen and ShikaMari, but I something about it pulled me in. I like his thought interjections and the minimalist tone of the piece, and I admire your writing style. *Favorites*
| aqua-empress chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Oh my. This is so sad QQ
But very cute though! :D
Loved it, aqua-empress
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
That was a very nice story. It was nice the way you made the story go. It was simple and direct and had a nice twingenof realisticity in it. I hope you keep it up. You are a very good writer.
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| chocovic-chu chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
ShikaTen. Friendship? okay! Platonic? Bring them on! ... Romance? Nyaa! All hail for ShikaTen!
If it's with Tenten, maybe ... just maybe, Shikamaru-gaki would do all smugness like this. XB (Beware, NejiTen. Because, Shikamaru-gaki is the brilliant rival to cause (not-)troublesome love-triangle thingy. Hehe.)
| half-note chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I was recommende this. Hahaha. I too read Sonnie's Sea of Sand. Man...time passes too fast! It was great btw. I too like all kinds of pairings even if my favorite is Nejiten. Greetings.
| Lili Bibi chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I'm a NejiTen fan, but I have to say, this is absolutely adorable!
| jaggedjacket chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
This was phenominal. I loved the parenthesis, and how spot-on Shikamaru is in this fic. Long live the non-cannon goodness!
| Uchihas1010Hyuuga chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Wow! It's really gooooood! I loved it! It would really be aweomse if there was a sequel to it hehe X3
| Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
This was really cute:)
| jasmineflowr19876 chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
i love shikaten...Great story!
| OasisSerenity chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
Shikamaru must have been so proud that he was Tenten's first and it wasn't Neji that got it before. Such a good story!
| ElleVipsilon chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Awesome! I really like this ShikaTen, perfectly believable :) Love it
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
It was a nice change of pace foe me.. good job :)
| Dreaming101 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Very cute, very sweet :)
| morning-tonight chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
First off, I am an ardent ShikaTem and, secondly, I am enamored with this story. It makes complete sense that Shikamaru would have at least a few crushes before he becomes Temari's and it just works that it would be Tenten. I loved how you did his thoughts, and hinted at at the NejiTen without really giving it away, well done. Thank you.