Reviews for Inside
Adrena chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
LMAO! For some reason I really like the Al/Marta ship, and this was just funny, because it's so how Ed, Marta, and Al would behave _
Cloud Watcher332 chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
: Vi...well...dominatrix means female dominator...so in BDSM, she's the one who's...on top...o_o''

qwerty: *snickers* you have no idea how red her face was when she said that XD
Vi chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
sweet, but i have no clue what domantrix means
Tragic warrior chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Hilarious. Too bad Marta is much older than Al. Why must everyone make fun of Ed for being so small, especially downstairs; it's not his fault. At least Ed can do it with Winry so Ed can rub it in A;'s face. Good story.
Starry McNight chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
Funny! AlMarta is cute!
White Butterfly chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Poor Al.. Getting teased mercilessly. Ahh but that is one reason I like this so much. Much teasing and fighting.

Good work.
Anna Strife0211 chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Nice fic...I liked a lot. And i was wondering, if its ok with you if I translate your story to spanish and publish it? Because i would like to

See ya and take care
Raging Psyco chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
Hehehehe... Like it lots!
guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
HAHAHAHA!HILARIOUS! I luv it.I'm adding to my favs.
PawShapedHeart chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Loved the lines Martel and Ed threw at eachother. Awsome... and it so fits!
Dragon Man 180 chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Now I'm even sadder that Marta was killed by Bradly, the bastard! You make all three get along really well.