Reviews for The Unexpected Visit
IamAnubis117 chapter 2 . 2/25/2008
Not gonna continue this?

SamJackShip chapter 2 . 6/30/2006
Can't wait for more! I wonder where they're going... :o)
Sam chapter 2 . 6/28/2006
Fun. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
sammie77 chapter 2 . 6/24/2006
I like it! About time Jack got his head out of his mikta! Keep going - I want more!
Ilovesg1 chapter 2 . 6/24/2006
A lot of mystery for a lunch date? Hum. This should be interesting. Daniel can stay in the dark.
iges2u chapter 2 . 6/24/2006
Promising story line and well written, but please update sooner - you leave your readers in suspense.
gategirl13 chapter 2 . 6/24/2006
o, whre are they going? love it so far. great start. please update soon!
Pandora of Ithilien chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
well, there isn't much to go on here, but it has a lot of potential. i for one would enjoy seeing more.
scarletwitch0 chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Cute beginning. Aded to my story alert list. I didn't see any mistakes.
Intergalactic smart-ass chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
cool story please write more
Krystal J chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I think you should keep writing. You have a very good beginning. UPDATE soon:)!
Ilovesg1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Nice beginning, but didn't anyone ever tell Daniel that curiosity killed the cat? With his dying and descending all the time, he doesn't have too many to spare.
Natters chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
good start. more please. what was plan B? ;)
DeniseM chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I really hope that you are going to continue with this story as I think it will be so good. Love what youve written so far.
Sci Fi Fan Gillian chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Good start.