|Reviews for The Unexpected Visit|
| IamAnubis117 chapter 2 . 2/25/2008
Not gonna continue this?
| SamJackShip chapter 2 . 6/30/2006
Can't wait for more! I wonder where they're going... :o)
| Sam chapter 2 . 6/28/2006
Fun. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
| sammie77 chapter 2 . 6/24/2006
I like it! About time Jack got his head out of his mikta! Keep going - I want more!
| Ilovesg1 chapter 2 . 6/24/2006
A lot of mystery for a lunch date? Hum. This should be interesting. Daniel can stay in the dark.
| iges2u chapter 2 . 6/24/2006
Promising story line and well written, but please update sooner - you leave your readers in suspense.
| gategirl13 chapter 2 . 6/24/2006
o, whre are they going? love it so far. great start. please update soon!
| Pandora of Ithilien chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
well, there isn't much to go on here, but it has a lot of potential. i for one would enjoy seeing more.
| scarletwitch0 chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Cute beginning. Aded to my story alert list. I didn't see any mistakes.
| Intergalactic smart-ass chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
cool story please write more
| Krystal J chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I think you should keep writing. You have a very good beginning. UPDATE soon:)!
| Ilovesg1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Nice beginning, but didn't anyone ever tell Daniel that curiosity killed the cat? With his dying and descending all the time, he doesn't have too many to spare.
| Natters chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
good start. more please. what was plan B? ;)
| DeniseM chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I really hope that you are going to continue with this story as I think it will be so good. Love what youve written so far.
| Sci Fi Fan Gillian chapter 1 . 12/29/2005