Reviews for She's Feeling
RowdyRomantic chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
Nice Job!

Reading some older fic's glad I found this one.
TheLifeILive chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Excellent follow up.

I've enjoyed the style that you wrote in for these first fics. I don't really know what to call it, but it's interesting and quite effective.

Terrific job.

Leah
irony882 chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
I really enjoy the two alternate endings overlapping with each other. Many times, I had to keep reminding myself that there were two different outcomes, as opposed to what has happened (italics) and what is happening now (regular). It creates a very clear image, and a Bones-like ("Bones" being the TV show, not the person nicknamed) atmosphere.
Habita chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Loved it!

Thanks for sharing! :-)
WildFlower084 chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
For some reason, I've never read this story before even though I've pretty much read all the stories in this fandom. Huh... weird. Anyway it was really really good and the parrallels didn't confuse me. I prefer the italics version! lol
dddynamite chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Wow sad bitter-sweet it was a bit confusing but I still think it was awsome!
DeamonFruba chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
This is really sweet. Although I am debating about which part is really happening. My vote is the non-itallic bit-the sad bit. But you are definitely going on my alert list if this is how you always write. :D

~Deamon
leradny chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
He knows he deserves it and he really is sorry. She is right when she says he never should have brought up her parents while she was on the stand.

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Oh man. I'm glad I stumbled across you in the Bones fandom first. You have superbly raised the bar of quality for me :D.
WOATCAPIITON chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
This was so good! Tastefull too and really cute! I wish u'd write more, more, more. Cant get enuf!

"She’s talking again, this time about desire and sexuality and procreation as they’re related to ancient man. He tells her to shut up..."

Laughed so hard at that, coz thats exactly wot I think Bones wud do too! LOL
AJeff chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
"She won’t look at him because he’s not dead and she can only count on the dead." Love this part. Plz write more. You're truly a maginificent writer! Thanks for sharing!
SlaYeRGiRLkaL chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Little confusing at the start but very good
Stephanie519 chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Aw, that's cute! It's a really good story!

Steph
Erkith chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
don't entirely get the use of Italics... but very enjoyable!

I look forward to your nect fic!
jezziebeth chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Absolutely wonderful, dear! I was going to post a review in livejournal, but of course there had to be a bug or something to interfer with it!

But excellent work. Absolutely wonderful.
lifesashow13 chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
this is so cool...I want more. Sequel maybe? Love the 2 stories in one idea.
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