|Reviews for Priorities|
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
I like the care that Peter gave his brother. The emotions are very powerful.
| Allie Danger chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I almost cried
| rosebudmelissa chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
This is well-written. I like how you were able to express the way Edmund's pain causes him to lash out and Peter's awkward attempts to help.
| sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Awesome. What a great moment between the two brothers before Narnia. I loved the emotion that was rife between them, how we can see just how messed up Ed is and how much Peter tries to make things work.
| The Terrible Jester chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Bittersweet. Well written. I liked.
| NOGOODTSUNA chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Hello this is Superbatflash27 from the Yj promt!
I KNEW IT! I absolutly new your stories would be wonderful! I love how you captured Ed's insucurities about Peter and the rest of his family and I love how sweet of a brother Peter is here! It all just fit lovely together! I am now off to read more of your stories my dear Ta-ta!
| Queen Edmund Pevensie chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
awww, it was sooo sweet!
| deeeeeactivated chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
They are both so cute in this! Brotherly love 3 will you write more?
| Desertfyre chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Very emotional yet beautiful story.
| MakeThisGoOnForever chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
This was sad and then cute. It was really good :)
| BleedingFlames chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I love it so much I wish I owned it...haha:D:D
| ds chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
| snowstargirl chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I don't know how many times I've read this story, and it's always wonderful; one of my very favorites. I think you wrote Peter's and Edmund's characters perfectly. Poor Edmund!
| YOKA chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I am from China and i like this story~fighting~!
| Squeels chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Eh! I loved it so much. I love the way you portrayed them! Perfect, easily!