Reviews for Priorities
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
I like the care that Peter gave his brother. The emotions are very powerful.
Allie Danger chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I almost cried
rosebudmelissa chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
This is well-written. I like how you were able to express the way Edmund's pain causes him to lash out and Peter's awkward attempts to help.
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Awesome. What a great moment between the two brothers before Narnia. I loved the emotion that was rife between them, how we can see just how messed up Ed is and how much Peter tries to make things work.

Sapphireswimming
The Terrible Jester chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Bittersweet. Well written. I liked.
NOGOODTSUNA chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Hello this is Superbatflash27 from the Yj promt!

I KNEW IT! I absolutly new your stories would be wonderful! I love how you captured Ed's insucurities about Peter and the rest of his family and I love how sweet of a brother Peter is here! It all just fit lovely together! I am now off to read more of your stories my dear Ta-ta!
Queen Edmund Pevensie chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
awww, it was sooo sweet!
InnocentSmile97 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
They are both so cute in this! Brotherly love 3 will you write more?
Desertfyre chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Very emotional yet beautiful story.
MakeThisGoOnForever chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
This was sad and then cute. It was really good :)
BleedingFlames chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I love it so much I wish I owned it...haha:D:D
ds chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
aw
snowstargirl chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I don't know how many times I've read this story, and it's always wonderful; one of my very favorites. I think you wrote Peter's and Edmund's characters perfectly. Poor Edmund!
YOKA chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I am from China and i like this storyfighting!
Squeels chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Eh! I loved it so much. I love the way you portrayed them! Perfect, easily!
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