Reviews for Sleep
Kat Woman chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
HaHaHa! I wonder what happend when Yuka got home! XOXOXO
Toxic Despair chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
one more thing

anyone else who flames this will feel my (and probably other peoples) wrath!
avastawiz chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
id like 2 say 2 things...



2. i really like the koutaxlucy pairing and ne 1 who doesnt can kiss my *!
solstrike00 chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
The short stories are appetitzing, though you should consider writing a feature-length story, since that'll definitely satiate my hunger for more of your work p.
Bota Kun chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Awesome! I don't know what a drabble is...but I hope to see more chapters! I really liked this. Good Job!
Ultimate-Diclonious chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Let me say this "Damn that YUKA!" And this "Brilliant!" This was coolness. I didn't see anything wrong with this at all. Keep up the good work!
Orange-Light chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
THis would be better if u had more chapters.
Dr. Acula -Calvin chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
:sticks a pipe up flaming kings ass then launches a bottle rocket through the other:

I loved it mwah LucyxKouta, so cute. I would actually love to have Lucy all to myself but I'll stop there.
hello chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
uh... hi? are you the one that is on the forums right? you know the one that speaks of elfen lied, and the others of your organization.. i readed all elfen lied stories, from your comrades, i am very shocked that there is a parasite flaming the elfen lied stories,

one more thing, i mean all in the "maple in" have been in contact with diclonius, very closely, and nana is still living with them... this got me thinking they will most certantly have children diclonius, and by the levels of exposure, their children will be like lucy,

i mean kouta will have children like lucy, certantly a queen needs a king? maybe this is a gift from lucy to them,the children will surely be pure blooded diclonius, same thing will yuka. but mayu certantly will, "if she chooses a guy", im saying this because of the high intimicy of nana and mayu in the anime series,

one fact that i found is that diclonius tend to be very protective towards their selected mate, they do not choose gender or race, for example lucy choosed kouta, and she sometimes was very protective and extremely friendy and sometimes submissive towards him

nana also fits in the example, very friendly towards mayu, one thing is certain if anything treatened their mate they would react very violentely, nana or lucy, they would gladly give their lives to protect that special person, im extremely disaponted that the cientists only studied their anatomy and litle about their relations with humans, one thing is certain yuka

maybe be in danger, if she tries anything with mayu, nana would not like it... that would explain why lucy killed kouta sister and father and not him, since she choosed him, but i am certain if lucy knew that yuka kissed kouta, she would kill her

in my country elfen lied was a scandal, because it afected the morals of my country, i would often go to school and some times i hearded some students talking about it even the teachers did not escaped, incest is very taboo in my country and the worst thing was about

the way the cientist treated those girls, reminded us about the years of repression when we where in the control of salazar,my grandfather told me stories about the way cientists treated some orphaned children and often conducted extremely inhuman experiences, my grandfather was in the army in those years, repression.

if you want more information about this see the history about portugal in the 20 century after the 2 world war

and i im very sorry if i molested you with my theories

i am deeply im shame if i caused you any kind of disconfort, please acept my humble and simple apologies
Cliffy G chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
I laugh at people like the last reviewer. I pity people who get a kick out of insulting other people's hard work. Anyways, great story! Another splendid job from Kat-Chan.

Keep it up!
the flaming king chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
i got bored looking around so imgoing around and flaming stuff. your fic happened to be the one i chose. don't take this seriously, i wouldn't want you to be mad and rant on mme. but anyways

the truth is

this sux! damn lucy. she deserved her fate. and damn yuka too. and damn kouta. and damn you for making this accursed fic! sux, sux, sux! 40 thumbz down! bo!
Warui-Usagi chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
Aw, that was so cute I LOVED IT! Great job Kat-chan!
Treesah Quiche chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
I loved this drabble and how "quiet" it was, but I hate it how Yuka's always portrayed as a jealous bitch. She's not. She's very complex, emotionally needy, and almost as traumatized as Kouta.
Descent Unit 25 chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
Question? Whats a drabble? (God, Ive been away from this community, no, for way too long.

I love the detail both you and FreshMeat put in your fiction.

Question? "Innocent".
LaniZion chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
It's fine the way it is. I think the ending fits this piece very well. There were a couple of spots where I had to reread, but I understood what you meant to say. , drabbles are starting to become your thing, huh? Kepp them coming! I love your drabbles, .
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