|Reviews for Elibe CROSS Tellius|
| Comic Wolf chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
I can't believe this made me laugh as hard as it did.
I just can't.
| Noon6 chapter 4 . 3/16/2006
are you going to update this or what cause it really is a good story
| Fire Hippo chapter 4 . 2/2/2006
Haw Haw Haw (pardon my RS reference).
You're turing this into a demented "Codename:Sain", which is bad enough as is! (I'm a schoolfriend of that story's author, if he wants to kill me for that, he'll do it at school)
Whoa... bad portrayal of Sain! No matter how annoying Serra is, Sain's still horny enough to flirt with her! Even over a radio! With two officers listening! (that's why he makes a good Bond, both are major horn dogs that would rather bed ANY FEMALE than complete the mission objective.)
Well... Fireinfernosoldier will be happy to know he has a fan... boy...girl... person... what the flux are you? NVM, I'll read your profile.
| random person number 7898 chapter 4 . 1/31/2006
this story is so funny keep writing
| Kilroywuzheere chapter 4 . 1/29/2006
Kilroy: I HAVE A FANBOY! (does the UBER-HAPPY DANCE! (tm))
Lute: NOT THE HAPPY DANCE! (huddles in corner)
Lyn: But Lute... this isn't the happy dance.
Zero: Yeah... It's the suped up version, the UBER-HAPPY DANCE! (tm).
Lute: *wimper* (curls into little ball)
Zero: ... (sweatdrops) I hope he doesn't set up the Hologram Machine (tm) again...
Lyn: You sliced that to pieces, remember?
Zero: Oh yeah...
(enter flashback mode (tm))
Zero: YOU BASTARD, YOU SET UP THE HOLOGRAM MACHINE (tm) TO SCARE THE SHIT OUT OF LUTE! (slices machine in two)
Kilroy: O.O It was just a joke.
Zero: *grr...* (slices Kilroy in two)
Kilroy: (Merges back into one while Zero was still slicing through him) OW! THAT ACTUALLY HURTS, YOU BASTARD!
Lyn: Okay, you two can stop now...
(end flashback mode (tm) before we get to the violent part)
Zero: That was awsome...
Kilroy: (still doing the UBER-HAPPY DANCE (tm))
Lute: (being liquified by UBER-HAPPY DANCE (tm))
Zero: (saves Lute by hitting Kilroy on the head with a bat)
Kilroy: LOL!11! WHAT WAS THT 4 U ASS HOLE!1/
Zero: CRAP! NOT AGAIN!
Lyn: Are you okay?
Zero: Lute, are you going to be okay?
Kilroy: This is pretty good!
Lyn: And random!
Kilroy: Yeah! Update soon! Kilroy out!
Zero: (slices Kilroy in half with Z-Saber)
Kilroy: (merges back into one like last time) Okay that does it! (teleports Zero into white space)
Zero: NO (fade to black)
| Siege-Master chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
AH MY FUKCING BRAIN! LEAHA!(continues to scream like Donut off redvsblue) no, no why my fucking brain! No one elses snapped at chapter one yet, like wtf!...by the way this is hilarious so far, keep it up!
| Fire Hippo chapter 3 . 1/15/2006
GYA! RANDOM INSANITY! I HAVE A HEADACHE!
...Or mabey that's just from playing "Cowboys from Hell" on my I-pod at max-ed out volume
Keep it up!
| Banana Rum chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
I could NOT stop laughing at the Lianne learning l33t thing. OMG, I'm still laughing... It's hard to type properly like this. I don't know...just imagining silent, sweet little Lillia speaking l33t. Tibarn, you are evil. 3v1l! XD Much love to this fic.
| Shadow 0f Chaos chapter 3 . 1/13/2006
Weird... strange... unheard of madness the likes of which I havent even done in my fanfic...
| Pono chapter 2 . 1/6/2006
Oh man, this is really funny. Please keep updating! I hope it gets better. Tibarn being Rambo was the funniest part so far though. Keep up the good work!
| fireemblemPRO chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
loved it!hilarious!keep it up n cant wait 4 da nex update
| Black Nights chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
lol! That was really funny. Please keep writing this as I like it!