Reviews for Surprise!
e chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
enjoyed it's intreasting! want to read more!
Nijello chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
you idiot! ash and mary-lynette , no stand in ways! got it! if it was his and mares d i woyuld be happy! waaaaaaah
zeddyz chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
This is a really good storry line please continue writin the next chapter! :)
random-SQUIRREL chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
great story can't wait for what happens next.
Mandy chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
this is getting good!

if only Mary Lynnette knew!

please hurry with the next chapter
vampgirl75 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Hello this was a great start to the story please update soon id like to know whats going to happen how Ash is going to handle this situation? How hes going to explain to his friends or family? And Mary-Lynnette and how will she react?
thee-dark-enchantress chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
.GOD! a !OMGOMGOMG!i bet Mare isn't going to like this and i did think was it his daughter or someone he knew !update soon,please!


darkangel1910 chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
Update please.
Parnopius chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
It's a good start, I like it. :) Will Mary-Lynette be making an appearance later? Update soon.
laura miller chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
really like the idea of this, ash having a long lost child (well five years or so!). i wonder how mare is gonna take it? will be very interesting to see how it plays out and what ash is gonna be like as a father. good stuff- keep going!
Ande chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Interesting start. Your story needs more description, though. How did Ash feel when he found out that he was a father? I don't think that he would just accept it and move on. What about when the wolves came? We don't know anything about how he feels. The readers need more than this to become really interested.