|Reviews for Fall Like Forever|
| Lady Charity chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
I truly enjoyed this excerpt! In my opinion, you portrayed Lao's feelings and emotions strongly, and though I felt more sympathy to Lao than Jeiin in this story, I still was heartened to know Jeiin would see her again.
| Monica Ronovitch chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Well done! I like the way you captured the emotions, as well as the way you wrote your details to describe the situation. My complements!