|Reviews for Breathe|
| Lady Shaye chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
I am a total Jason/Nicky fan, but this story blew me away. You are SUCH a good writer. And I don't think Jason ever really forgot Marie, you know, simply because they were so compatible and she was so accepting. Not to mention, they were in love, that kind of love you never get to see because it was in-between movies.
Really good. Favorited.
| inkspire chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Gosh, I love this story. So clearly Marie's voice throughout, and both the toils and the joys of her life with Jason are touched on just lightly enough it takes your breath away, yet keeping you focused on the present of her life. So well done! Thank you!
| shallowness chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
This is beautiful and I'm instantly adopting it as canon. I love the details, the way the fic acknowledges Marie's sacrifices, but why it's worth it. The way that memory runs through the fic is also nicely done.
| Kellifer chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
This was lovely.
| SW chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Beautiful story. I always loved this coupling, found it so intriguing. You write them beautifully - I am completely captured by your characterization of Marie, and how she helps Jason. Great job!
| jheria s. Maelwys chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
very good. It manages to be spacewithintimes, that is, not specifically within a movie, a book, a timebetween movies or books or imagination or anything, just is and I like that. Also the original spelling of the girl's name although I prefer Kathryn, the most beautiful... I'm babbling now, as Marie says at sixty miles per hour... I'll shut up and you don't have a headache.
| the-coconut-bubble chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
I am so, so glad I found this story. It's exactly how a Jason and Marie fic should be. With the infinitely hot Matt Damon starring in my mind's eye of course. Well done, well done indeed.
| openattheclose chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Beautiful. Not fluffy, but not hideously depressing either-you managed to write about things that are, in a word, sad, yet still portray it all wonderfully.
The last line is gorgeous as well. And the small touches like the notebook and her journal, the cookies-they all add to it.
| TimesARiver chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Wow! Great story! Well done with all the descriptions and characterization. Well done!
| Young Fossils chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
I love this story in my opinion, there aren't enough Jason/Marie fics. I really never like the whole Jason/Nicky pairing in the movies anyway.
| Jowen chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
I absolutely love this fic! It is so well written and simply beautiful. I wish there was more. I also wish Marie didn’t die or at least that they didn’t kill her off so quickly. Sadly, the writers were on crack.
| Almyra chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
Beautiful. Just really lovely. You captured Marie's voice perfectly - I could hear her speaking and see her and Jason clearly. Well done. *adds to favs*
| Lucifer's Garden chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Very good. Surprisingly good. You have real talent!
| Rachael chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
I really loved this, I hate how tortured Jason is, but obviously I love it at the same time, don't we all. Really great insight to their relationship, sorta how I imagined it would be.
| seren23 chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
I just found your story and am just amazed at how perfectly you got the two of them. I always loved Marie and this is just lovely. Thank you for writing this!